Car thing

[Wildfire]

Another one

[Wildfire]

And finally the last update, hi res

[Wildfire]

Any opinions? Feedback would be much appreciated

[cdinic]

looks like a good start. I like the bumps over the front wheels.

at first glance I felt like it was stretched to long.

the wheel them selves, not the tires, need more detail. if u look at photos of wheels similar in style to your u'll notice more contour and detail.

the bars running from door to roof seem super low poly.. almost as if they are one face. they need some curve and roundedness.

the grill also needs some terminating detail where the horizontal fins meet the body.

your shaders need some work to. the glass seems like it's a cheep plexie glass. try reflecting white cards. there tons of literature on glass.

the back air foil could use some thickness. it looks like a few flat planes as off now..

I hope this doesn't discourage you. It's definitely got potential! keep it up

-Chris

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