P-40 Warhawk

[LuisTomas]

Very good work!!! Bueno, dejemonos de Ingles... que esta de pm tio, enhorabuena, me mola mucho como ha quedado todo junto, aviones y nubes. Ahora a por el siguiente!!!:D

[dmelchordiaz]

Congratulations! This work is impressive. :applause: The only problem that I see it, is that becomes too shortly. :) You are improving in every work that you do. :thumbsup:

[Manter]

Looks very good, I would like to see a longer one!:thumbsup:

[tiflos20]

Pero tio!! ponte unos wires!!! antes de k te los pidan!! :)
esta muy bien tio, mucho curro... unos tiros habrian quedado cojonudos, pero mas curro claro, jeje. muy bueno tio!

[Rlloret]

Wires, wires wires!

Thanks for your opinions. Let´s go to the wires!


http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/p-40_top_50.jpg

http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/p-40_front_50.jpg

http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/p-40_left_50.jpg


http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/p-40_cabina_50.jpg

[logante]

hi rodri :scream: as all your work the quality is impressive, congratulation man.
Only 10 days for GOW, beer and ... jajjajaj!!

Five stars!

Logan.

[oxhido]

this is ****ing good!!!

congratulations, a great piece of work. a five stars type of work.

ivan.oxh

[joserod]

Congratulations rodri, good work!!i remember me, at battle of brittain of chewaka.
Un saluo colega y sigue asi que mola todo campeon

[moriarty]

Awesome, nen. I can´t wait for a new one. Nos vemos en los bares, ala a cagarla.

[Rlloret]

Hi!

Thanks for all.

Two examples about the textures:

http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/fuselage_tex_01_50.jpg


http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/wings_tex_01_50.jpg



This is the texture to the background:


http://www.rlloret.com/imagenes/personal_Work/p40/forums/sky_01_50.jpg



Thanks!

[dutchtilt]

i really like this piece....i know how difficult maya fluids can be...especially with regards to rendering and art direction.

I agree, id like to see more, and some more animation...

id also like to see more of the ground, so we have frame of reference for speed. Or you could achieve this be having some/more clouds fly by the lens...anything that is more stationary so we can see how fast they are moving.

[emeZ]

Wow, man, good work.
Seems realistic, I like the compose that you have made. It's really cool.
The only thing that I don't like, but it's a detail, It's the animation of the second P-40 when stop near the first P-40 .
Anyway it's a good work, man. I like the "old documental" style.
Five Stars dude.

emeZ.

[Dalan]

I´m very very impressed!...WOW!

I´ve never seen somthing of your work!...I didn´t hope nothing like this!..what a sorprise! ;)

Great work Nen! Five stars for you and many patience for your next works...WE WANT MORE!!

[KOKE]

This work is just great !

It has a cool cinematic feeling to it.
I agree with Duthctilt in that a couple of clouds passing quickly could improve the feeling of speed for this piece.

Great job.

JK.

:D

[chewaka]

Hey Rodri!!

I think is a very good piece...

...But, under my opinion, I think maybe, the film have to much noise, only maybe...but looks great!!...I like the animation of fighters and the background...good job.

Cheers!!

Lenya al mono que es de goma!!

Saludos!!

[Rlloret]

Hi guys!


Thanks for all your coments.

Koke - Dutchtilt: It´s truth that more cloud near to the planes improve the feeling of speed but, I would see more of the backgruound and more depth.

Chewaka: It´s another posibility and in my next proyects I´ll have on my mind.

Thanks for your critics, guys!

[Johnnybiped]

A very good work, very "realistico". :eek:

[Skyraider3D]

Good work Rodrigo, that's looking really nice! The P-40s look convincing as does the backdrop. Textures look great too.

I do agree with the comments that the clouds should be movng a bit, to suggest speed.

Also the aircraft are much too shiny now. WW2 paints were usually matt or semi-gloss at best. even gloss paints wear down to become very dull in a matter of weeks, under combat conditions.

The sound should be replaced, I think. The aircraft sound like Cessnas, not like mighty V12-powered warbirds. It makes a huge difference.

Some historic notes... the P-40 was made by Curtiss, not North American, so it's the Curtiss P-40 Warhawk.

The worst thing about your animation: it's too short!!! :bounce:
Please make more! ;)

Nice WIP section on your website, by the way. Very nice work Rodrigo! :thumbsup:


PS. please post your work also on www.military-meshes.com/forums (http://www.military-meshes.com/forums)

[Delfos]

What can i say? it´s a explendid work...

I´m agree with Skyraider with the worst thing about it: it´s too short. :)

I hope to see your next proyects soon.

[katana2665]

overall nicely done, I think the second planes snaps into formation a bit to fast...but that's just me, I ain't flyin'...nice work.

[Stormy151]

Wow, that is really cool! I like the "washed out" look- it makes it look like old film.

I am working on an aircraft animation as well- how do you go about creating the ground in a scene like this? Use an aerial photograph as a texture?

[Rlloret]

Hi guys!

Thanks for all your comments and cristics... these are necessary to improved!! :thumbsup:

Skyraider3D: You are in right... this is not a North American aircraft is a Curtiss... I´m mistake. Too short!! ja,ja,ja... Thanks for all.

EmeZ: You are in right, too... The animation it´s not right but I´m not animator :) I think it´s good if you don´t see more errors; but in my next work I´ll be careful with the animation. Thanks for all.

Katana2665: Maybe yes or maybe not... in my documantation a piece of "Battle of Britain" the snap of the planes it´s very fast. I tryed follow my documentation only this. Thanks for all.

Stormy151: The texture of the background I made with several photos of the skies and 360 skies, and several screenshots of the Goolge Earth... and then I composed all in Photoshop.

Thanks for all guys!

[ParamountCell]

Hi guys!

Thanks for all your comments and cristics... these are necessary to improved!! :thumbsup:

Skyraider3D: You are in right... this is not a North American aircraft is a Curtiss... I´m mistake. Too short!! ja,ja,ja... Thanks for all.

EmeZ: You are in right, too... The animation it´s not right but I´m not animator :) I think it´s good if you don´t see more errors; but in my next work I´ll be careful with the animation. Thanks for all.

Katana2665: Maybe yes or maybe not... in my documantation a piece of "Battle of Britain" the snap of the planes it´s very fast. I tryed follow my documentation only this. Thanks for all.

Stormy151: The texture of the background I made with several photos of the skies and 360 skies, and several screenshots of the Goolge Earth... and then I composed all in Photoshop.

Thanks for all guys!

excellent!!! love the making of aswell.

[PedramK]

Hey Rod, i saw it yesterday but forgot to drop a msg :scream:
really good stuff dude, reminded me of some scenes from flags of our fathers.
Any plans on expanding the animation to maybe include some fighting ? now thatd be cream ontop a great piece!

[LDraven]

Very very impressive work brother!!!.

Ya sabes como siempre, buen trabajo tron.
A ver si juntamos tus aviones y mis tanques y montamos una batalla espectacular jeje.

Un abrazo.

PD: Eseeee Chewakaaaaaaaaaa a ver si un dia podemos hablar por MSN o algo pa ver que tal te va todo, espero que genial. Un abrazote tio, cuidate.

[jlyapor]

nice work! I think the comp is great, realistic, good job on the renders as well. I have to agree with emeZ tho, the first time I saw it I noticed the weight of that second plane was a bit unnatural, I didn't feel the power of the engine as it was rising... other than that, I think it's wicked. good luck.

-jesus

[manuman]

Hey Rodri , look great.

Que pasa tio , esto del ingles ....

Tio por fin lo veo colgado y terminado , je je ya tenia ganas.
Como siempre un gran trabajo de un gran profesional , tenemos que quedar y tomarnos unas birras para celebrarlo.

five stars.

p.d : Alucino con el fondo.

[Rlloret]

Hi all!

Thanks for your comments and critics!

PedramK: I good see you in this post!! Fighting...? Ja,ja,ja it´s too much work! Really I thinking in other version with Zero fighters... and action.

LDraven: Thanks for tour comment! I´ll think in this idea!

jlyapor: Thanks for your comments! Same to emeZ... you are right!

manuman: Thanks for all Manu! You pay the beers? OK! No problem, I pay the beers!:thumbsup:

[Sir3DMIND]

Hey man!!

This is a really impresive piece of work. I can´t wait now to see this planes fighting against the enemy in a longest piece. Anyway, I know you are thinking now in a complete diferent work so, give your best and surprise us all again.

GOOD WORK!!

Five stars work for me :thumbsup:

[Rlloret]

Hi guys!

In Nov 24 you can see a tutorial about this animation in www.cgarena.com

Sir3DMIND: Thanks for yours comments! I hope see you soon!


Thanks!

[KOKE]

Hi guys!

In Nov 24 you can see a tutorial about this animation in www.cgarena.com (http://www.cgarena.com)

Sir3DMIND: Thanks for yours comments! I hope see you soon!


Thanks!

Nice!,

I saw the behind the scenes in your website and it was quite interesting.
I will check this one out also.

JK.

:D

[stevedale]

Really cool, I wish it was longer!

[logante]

chewaka said: I think maybe, the film have to much noise, only maybe...but looks great!!...I like the animation of fighters and the background...good job.

Yes Rodri, I agree with chewaka in this aspect, the film must has much more noise and maybe you can probe to do the animation in BW or sepia color...

But the work is impressive , remind me a pearl harbor scenes. I´m impatient to see the next proyect :thumbsup:

The textures and wireframe is cool!

Chewaka, I´m impatient to see your next personal proyect!

Logan.

[Rlloret]

Hi!

The tutorial is on-line now! You can find it in this link

Link (http://www.cgarena.com/freestuff/tutorials/maya/pacificwar/index.html)

I hope you like it... is a complement of that you can find in my web.


Thanks!

[nickryan]

Hi Rodri

That is a nice piece of work. I think the problem that people may have with the animation of the plane is a combination of two things. You are correct in that the way the planes flew in real life were with sharp anad pronounced manoeuvres, however, the final part of the animation where it flies into formation with the first P-40 is slightly off. This is accentuated a bit by the camera move. The camera is a 'hand-held' type of move and you pre-empt the move of the plane, that is to say, you move the camera ahead of the plane moving, anticipating where it is going to go. It is more realistic to allow the plane to move and then follow, as that is more likely to happen in real life. I guess the best thing is to watch a lot of footage, reference is key.

I have just completed a film about pilots attempting to break the sound barrier, and spent a good deal of time working on aerial sequences. I built a B-29, a Bell X1 and a P-80, and all digital environments. I am finishing up a site and will post a link as soon as I have it ready.
Well done, looks good.

Nick

[Rlloret]

Hi, guys!

nickryan: Thanks for your comments and critics! I think you are right, the camera it´s not perfect, the anticipation to the p-40 and follow it, it´s no correct. I must had let breath the animation, to made more realistic. In my next animation I must be careful. Thanks for your comments. Please when you finish your animation send me the link to my e-mail I´ll be greatful to you.


In few weeks I hope submit a new image composition with P-40.


Thanks for all, guys!

[nickryan]

Hi Rodri

I have posted a thread in this forum and also in CG News about my short film, 'A Lonely Sky'.

Here's a link to the website: www.alonelysky.com (http://www.alonelysky.com)

Now it's your turn to give some critical appraisalhttp://forums.cgsociety.org/images/icons/icon10.gif
Nick

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