Rachel Head

[Temporal]

Very nice work, can't find anything wrong with it except that I find it hard seeing this as a female, and that the ears hang down too much. Fix that and it will be perfect.

[alesmav]

hi

The model looks fine to me, except the head in front view is too narrow, make the top part of the head wider and more round. Ears are perhaps sticking out too much, but then again some people have ears like that...

Good work, like the David Bowie eye style...

ALES

[enoxa]

here is a bigger image...
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/Rachel.jpg

and a quick render test
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/RachelColor.jpg

[Temporal]

I still can't see anything wrong with it besides the long ears, it's like she's wearing very large and heavy earrings. And the gray eye, which looks concave in the render. Otherwise, Good job :)

[mikeS]

hi

really good model !!! maybe the the eyes are a little bit to high up and the nose is too thin. Hope you will texture her!!!!:)

[enoxa]

thanks for your replies. I've tweaked the ears and enlarged a bit the neck. What do you think?
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/Rachel2.jpg
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/RachelColor2.jpg

[enoxa]

and here is the body. I think something is weong with proportions and i should make the legs shorter. Am i true?
http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/RachelFull.jpg

[enoxa]

here's a big update. What do you think now?

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/enoxa/Snapyfall.jpg

[comfortablydumb]

Perhaps thin out her shoulders and biceps. Even for a warrior she is looking a lil too buff for a girl.

Other than that she looks great, but those eyes are freakin me out man, I mean is she half puppy dog or somethin??:surprised

[tate242]

Her Arms appear to be too short. At rest your fingertips should be nearly halfway between your waist, and your knee. Her neck also appears to be too long, which makes her head too far forward. Hope this helps! Looks good otherwise! Tate

[enoxa]

thanks for your tips. I'll post the update soon!!!

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