Bedroom

[dbach]

I am not shure it could be the camera lens but I think you realy need to work on your porportions. Also there should be at least a light fixture to explain where the light is coming from (I am not counting the one attatched to the shelves). Some junk in the room could help, things on the floor on the desk on the shelves, make it look lived in. Unless it's suposed to be abandoned then put some holes in the walls and floor maby a fallen beam. With a different camera angle different lighting and some thexturing work this has the oportunity to be a interesting scene. Don't forget to take things past the extreame and then bring them back just enough.

Let me know how it turns out.

Out,
Don

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