Eon (3D Scene) Entry: Sacha Angel Diener

[TheFirstAngel]

lol, silly old me, thought i already joined the trailer, i anyways will make tons of little 3d scenes, so why not make 1 nice n big as well. 3d fun begions as well ^^ have fun mates and let it rock! :beer::buttrock::scream::wip:

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162406193_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162406193_large.jpg)

just a quick thumbnail, a more detailed sketch of the scene later today, patricia lanier and olmi in front of axis city before the takeoff. in thebackground: the wald
k, the 3d fun begins :)

[warpy]

i was here first !

[Blanks]

liking the concept and loving the colour sheme.

Goodluck

[beelow]

Dude your crazy, LOL! Can it be done?:shrug: :D

[DaVee]

Very nIce sketch, And i'm surprise about how it will goes.
Something amazing i'm sure.
:thumbsup:
David.

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162421278_large.jpg
just initial coloring and blocking, first pass, more detailing later tonight
:)

[TheFirstAngel]

warpy: hahaha :) welcome abord ol friend!

blanks: thanks mate, best of luck to you too. :)

beelow: yeah of course it can be done, i always intended to make a trailer and now that i started it, it would be a joke not make a hipolyscene of it as well. only thing i hope is that time will be kind and i can keep up my own timeline.

DaVee: thanks mate :) posted the first coloring step, next one should be done later toninight, once the composition works, speedmodelling starts :) lets find out if i can keep up that speed ^^

thanks for the warm welcome and the encouragements. best of luck to you all and now let's rock! :beer::buttrock::wip:

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162439112_large.jpg
ok, this so far should be good enough as guideline, this is more or less what i'll be aiming for, any c&c most welcome as always :)

[gringer]

Wow, looking mighty fine there. You're darn good. Best of luck with your entry.

Cheers :D

[simovici]

:shrug:

I have no words. the concept looks awsome. Good luck

[SweD]

hum...TheFirstAngel here ! welcome aboard mate ! :rolleyes:
your concept seems to be interesting again, and i can't wait to see your fist modeling.
Have fun here :)

[Nothingness]

great conceptskech

the main view directions in the whole image are very well balanced.
no crits from me.


cheers

[Flunky3D]

I'm Realy Astonished by your skech!
It looks so siblime.

Good luck with working out this great concept:thumbsup:

"What software did you use to color your skech?"
Me juist curious

cheers

[johnnymaster]

can't repeat enough times....i love the skin....hahaha, great dude! Many such scenes in 3D...are you escaped from madhouse or what? I'm very curious to see the final characters! With your words: let's rock:buttrock:

[PMD]

This is among the best I've seen so far - absolutely brilliant sketch. A bit of cleaning-up and this would be a very respectable 2D entry! Look forward to seeing where you go with this, Sacha.

[soapy]

Awesome sketch! It will make a great scene. Looking forward to seeing it develop. Cheers, good luck.

[HowieFarkes]

Very impressed with your illustration. Can't wait to see it realised in 3d.

[nwiz25]

:eek: holy moly! :eek:

Sacha ma man! u rock as usual! :buttrock:


brilliant colours and mood! :eek:

keep em comin buddy!

cheers! :beer:

[SoniaNotRed]

Wow, that's impressive! :eek:
Love the colors.
I hope you get to finish this one.

Good luck! :)

[highbred3d]

Looks great sacha, Nice pallete and composition. Can't wait to see it built!

[amz23]

Ohhhh! This sketch sure looks great, I like the dark-yet-glowing ambience, a dark tunnel illuminated by that powerful beam and all those lights... nice! It reminds me of Matrix a little...

I bet it will look great at the end :applause: !

[krrrk]

wow man, starts to look pretty impressive :bounce:

keep it up
curious to see it in 3-D

[DaVee]

speedmodelling starts :) lets find out if i can keep up that speed ^^

That's the worst i wish to you! It's nice to see sketches of a skifull artist like you!

:thumbsup:
David.

[Zapan]

U nut !!! :eek: ... If you achieve that , I will hate you forever ...

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162882461_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162882461_large.jpg)

started modelling a bit. just speedmodel session more refining later today :) hehe the fun starts :)

[gringer]

Excellent modeling man! :D

[daWinky]

Morning Sacha,

you're fast with your Patricia, looks like a promising start:thumbsup: ! I'm very curious now to discover more of your 3d work!:bounce: Somehow I'm sure it will be great:) ...


-sabrina

[TheFirstAngel]

gringer: thanks a lot mate :) best of luck to oyou too

simovici: thanks mate. glad you like it. good luck to you too

SweD: hahaha yep me here^^ couldnt resist ^^ glad you like the baseconcept, started on the first few polys. much to tweak but at least this section gets moving :) have fun too old friend ^^

Nothingness: thanks mate :)

Knowledge: thanks a lot. I painted this in photoshop cs2 on a wacom cintiq 21ux.

Johnnymaster: hahaha lol yeah. you might start your butt off talking bout the skin when i start suffering with the whacky sss, cuz my machine royally sux. jeez, love how you do your shaders man, so, compliment back to you too^^ let it rock!

PMD: thanks a lot. well i consider to finish the sketch eventually to add it to my portfolio, either way for a rough base for a 3d scene its fuliling its purpose for me ^^ glad ya like it Phil!

Soapy: :) thanks and best of luck to you too mate!

HowieFarkes: thanks man!

Nwiz: hahaha thanks a lot. notices you are probably actual most active in cheering, much appreciated mate, glad you like the start

SoniaNotRed: hope that too... my stupid machne broke down so i actually work on a p3 1ghz with 512 mb ram ^^ thats snailraicing by word :p

Highbred3d: thanks a lot! i just started ad threw the first polys :)

AMZ23: well yeah, matrix has tunnels too but read the book, first its great second you might get tons of scenes into your mind - this was where i thought i stick with it with a 3d scene :)

Krrrk: thanks man. just started, working on it

DaVeeee: hahaha thankeees. same goes back ^^

Zapan: lol, old nuts, hahahah you got a good chance you won't have to, if anyways so, i'll return that on you and spam you as long as you'll trow your polys to cgtalk ol nuts! rofl :scream:

OK, all c&c most welcome. spent an hour on the character after a long working day. some might be off and to fix. basically what wont be visable will sty low in details, main volumes will be tweaked and some parts refined in zbrush. so later here some more modelling, thanks all for the encouragements, best of luck to you all and keep on rocking :buttrock:

[TheFirstAngel]

gringer: thanks a lot :)

Sabrina: hehe, thanks. well its just a 3d rough, lowpoly and needs much work, glad you like the start on her :)... thanks for the nice words - i easily return you that for your entry, you simply rock! :beer::buttrock::wip: keep it up!

[tastatura]

this will be great scene at the end, I like how you conceptualize the Axis city flow and the grand structure in there, its inspiring :thumbsup:

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162929420_large.jpg
temporary made a quick lowres bitmap for having a base for tweaking, here's step 1a - basemodelling patricia

[TheFirstAngel]

tastatura: thanks a lot mate. nice to hear my work inspires you! hope that lasts:) best of luck in the challenge and have lots of fun :)

[Vitala]

Good looking model there angel!. look forward to seeing more!

[DrIvErD]

its cool sasha , am speachless i dont know what to say (awesome, am waiting for your bomb!!) :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[Gunilla]

What? Here too? :eek:
You're amazing - if you can finish all sections you're totally nuts :D

Looking good - your 3d Patricia looks a lot like your 2d version, very nice.

Good luck (and remember to sleep once in a while)

[mehmi]

The model is good for this stage, so dont worry your buttcheeks about it :D
if you think the neck is too long, then shorten it. but at this stage i dont think many people are noticing it. i only did once i concentrated hard x3
as always angel your stuff rocks :buttrock: keep it up!

ps try and spam my name around DA so that i get famous ;)

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162962652_large.jpg
took in account mehmi's constructive crit tried fixing neck and shoulderarea :). well webdesign is exhausting, ble didnt make it to work much. just a quick shadertest, but as long as the maps atentn't made the shader wont look perfect anyways. i plan finish the model tomorrow so i can start the it up to zbrush fun :)
any c&c of course most welcome,
cheers

[mehmi]

more constructive crit xD it looks better now, except she has a turtle neck. uhm. yeah ^_^:thumbsup:

[TheFirstAngel]

Vitala: thnaks a lot :) well much to do on it still but too tired agter webdesign, tho, ble. i am not a webdesigner but comissions come first :p hope i can get the modeling and unwraping done tomorrow so i can paint the maps :)

DrIvErD: thanks mate. well 3d in this case gets less fast than usual since i work on my emergency setup :p glad you like the progress anyways :)

Gunilla: hehe thanks. yep, i am in all 3 sections, hope i will finish em all in time :) best of luck to you too

Mehmi: thank you so much, thats what i needed. i am very thankful for the constructive crits, usually when i work fast, i oversee things and see them after posting them or skip things i should have seen myself ^^ thanks for the tip, hope the fixing worked.
going to review the shole anatomy tomorrow with a freah pair of eyes :)

off to bed after a way too long day, thanks all for the nice words and constructive crits! keep on rocking! :beer::buttrock::wip:

[johnnymaster]

very nice dude and above all very fast! As i can see, we have the same work time hehehe. Okay, now to the crits...first of all, i think her body is a bit to masculine due the shoulder and the hip, if you try to cover her arms completely by your fingers, she (her shoulder) will looks very feminine, then maybe try to scale her hips up.... then i think she'll looks a lot more female and sexier!
But altogehter great work in such amount of time! Hope could give some tips...good luck further on mate!

[thebest]

weeeeee have nice zbrushing hehehe :scream:

[OZ]

cool patricia model! even the texturing looks cool! KEEP IT UP! your scene looks great in 2d...i can only imagine how cool may be in 3d!!!

[daWinky]

:eek: man, what do you have for breakfast??! Can't belive you're so fast, it looks like you make the stuff I need a week for in less than a day...and she already looks so promising...:thumbsup: ...And all this while dancing on 3 parties at the same time:shrug:

I think I'm envy now...:sad: ...:D

-sabrina

[black-hand-77]

Sacha Angel Diener is entered in the "Eon Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/view_entries.php?challenger=12368)

Latest Update: Modeling: small update, shoulder and neck tweaks,
http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1162962652_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=3989640#post3989640)

If I weren't married, I would say this is the one. Cool latino babe. Fire-hot!

[ChewyPixels]

Really great start on Patricia! :thumbsup:

One question. Why model her nude? Do you plan on having her show lots of skin? Not a complaint as I wouldn't mind seeing her this way. :D

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1163280139_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1163280139_large.jpg)

juat a quick test with the tubelight, now back to finish the patricia model and start the hipoly works.

[TheFirstAngel]

mehmi: thx, going to fix her neck now. :) wanted to get the layout done so i got a setup i can go with.

johnnymaster: thanks for your points, got em on my to-fix-list :) thanks a lot and best of luck to you too!

Tony: thanks mate :) yup, in an hour or 2, zbrush starts. unwrapping is part of te 3d wich i find annoying :p so zbrush is what you get for it. hehe, on with the fun :)

OZ: thanks a lot mate! well its just an ultraquick lowres map i painted to see how the model works. :) glad you liked the test. next update in a few hours, goin to finish the modeling now and zbrush her up to where she's supposed to be. ble, not looking forward to the unwrapping and even lesss to the riging, both parts of the work i don't like, dunno whats worse ^^

black_hand_77: thanks a lot mate, glad you like the rough model. hope you'll like the hires still as well :)

Jedi-Juice: simple answer. i usually start with the nude model. not sure it will need clothsim this time since the animation will be very short. but in the trailer she'll have a longer apearance and i wanted to go for the complete progress. thou, since i lack of machinepower at the moment, i'll probably simplify the workflow and see whats going to be required to make her look good. :)

thanks all for the nice words and construtive crits, on with the fun, back here shortly with the modellingupdate :) keep on rocking mates!

[AndreiSzasz]

hey man !
this is goimg to loock great. i like your sketch and 3d previz :thumbsup:
good luck!

[kmest]

great start sacha:bounce: :bounce: .....the model is so nice that i cant say anything more exept that i wish the face goes to your stylish lovely girls....
and the composition seems fine....the lights need to be more egzajrated
keeping an eye on this one too...:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1163314952_large.jpg
another quick update, almost forgot to post it ^^ here's the finished basemodel before it goes to zbrush. tons of little tweaks made, finished ears and other minor details, made her wider hips, and a nice round latina butt :) the map as said earlier is just a lowres bitmap that will get repainted now hires with all the other maps such as specualr, bumb, and so on... here's the girl, Patricia Luisa Vasquez in her first version :) hope you like her :) all c&c most welcome as usual

[TheFirstAngel]

AndreiSzasz: thanks mate. i found the 3d previz very important to make since this clearly shows me what will be visable in the final shot and where i can save time and polys to put them in a place where the are seen... basic attemp also to get fast rendersettings with the volumetrics (actually a bit under 2 mins at the moment) so the 3d sketch is making much sense for me to do. glad you like the sketch so far... :)

kmest: lol more girls??? maybe i'll place a sexy pilor somewhere in one of the spaceships flying by specially for you - tho, patricia is the mainactress here and the place where i'll model more girls probably will be my trailer :) now on with the fun, zbrush action after sleep ^^

[gpepper]

Wow !
This is the first time I see 3D things from you and I have to say that you know what you are talking about !
Great to see that you keep your style even with a 3D software !
next, please !

[thebest]

she looks ready for zbrush hehe go go go go :twisted:
waiting for the zbrushed version :bounce:

[ChewyPixels]

Yeah, I like Patricia v1. :) What are you planning for the clothes? Will they remain painted on?

Anyway, looking forward to seeing Patricia v2. :D

[gardogg]

Wow, great work on this model and the sketches and everything in general. Very ambitious!

[TheFirstAngel]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/12368/12368_1163400111_large.jpg
test 3 on the environment, made a displacementtest and some first works on the textures i know i wanted to go for the gurl first but then i stumbled over my wacky previz and decieded to give it some refinements. here's a 3rd test. any c&c most appreciated :)

[TheFirstAngel]

gpepper: really? ^^ well i make 3d since a few years already and work as modeller and conceptartist since a while already :) basically i just try to do what i usually do but save many many resources for last since i work on my emergency setup, a p3 1ghz with 512 mb ram :( tons of problems to keep it short "what can i do to save resources, what else can i do to save resources ^^ :p glad my 3d work works for you :) thanks a lot for the encouragements!

thebest: hahaha lol. jup :) but i skipped it and jumped back on the environment so i see how much time is left since characters are the easiest part for me to do :)

Jedi-Juice: well not sure yet. 2 possebileties, zbrush clothes directly on her and add a few more details on the basemodel, or, go for a jumpsute that is clothfx. not decieded yet but the actual lingerie she wears is just painted to have it there :p dont worry, she'll get a full set of clothes incl. a pilotjacket.

gardogg: thanks a lot. simply wanted to get bak to a nice 3d project and i liked the topic a lot. so... after hacing made tons of sketches for a cinematic poster i started the trailerworks and when i stumbled over the final cutscene, i thought i should make that hipoly ^^ not too ambitious, just nust silly old me having had a stupid sleepstealing idea ^^

thanks all for the comments and crits, i'll go for mor work on patricia after a bit of sleep and a regular work day :) keep on rocking, cheers :beer::buttrock::wip:

[mehmi]

your "doll" model xD is looking good, better now. i have spotted one thing, her lower arms are larger than her upper arms. now im not that good at anatomy, but my upper arms are larger than my lower arms. either she's got really tiny bones, or not enough muscle/flab on the uppers ^^
**replace's "doll" with patricia.** i remember her name now x3
keep rocking:buttrock:

[makaron]

like that comp... a vast background and the gang as coming towards the viewer...

simple but effective... :thumbsup:

[beelow]

Looks cool, Right now. Maybe some foreground Elements will help!:thumbsup:

Sorry msn kicked off and I cannot reconnect. So I thought I would post it here. hehe!:D

[thebest]

weee rocking dude no crits for now waiting to see more :bounce:

[Gunilla]

I really like your concept for the scene - that tube light is just beautiful.
The posing for the characters looks a bit unexplored though - but I'm sure you come to that.
Keep on rockin!

[TheFirstAngel]

gunnie: thank you so much :)

mehmi: tweaked, thanks for the review :)

makaron: thank you so much mona. yup, focalpoint on highest contrast makes that, my ambientlight is the tubelight and a set of softedged targetspots do the rest incl. 1 red pulsing effectlight. my minfocus was to create a fast easoily renderable lightsetup for the scene and i am happy it stays under 2 mins yet. :)

thebest: thanks a lot tony, glad you like it :)

beelow, will do, just checking. 1 pssebiety is to place the v/stol there, another is just place a buildings basement with some nice things like wires and trass/rig elements to have a nice silhuoette cutting the side, thou, a flyby on the spaceship may be a more thnakful result for an animatable result in focus :) prolly going to stick with the spaceshipidea

[chandro]

i like your concept:thumbsup:

[adel3d]

great eon work
good luck in 3D :thumbsup:

[3dRaven]

Best of luck Sacha.
I'm sure you've got the skills to make a great 3d peice, just hope you find the time :D .We all know its pretty rough to find time in the real world.

[Zapan]

Give me a S ... Give me an A ... Give me a C ... Give me an H ... Give me an A ....

http://images.leportailweb.com/clips/smiley/ipb/cheer.gif .... :scream:

Keep on rocking

[Nomad]

Nice progress and verry interesting scene :thumbsup:


One detail: if you want to be close to the book... and only if you want, I think Patricia use tablets (tabletPC?), your map looks like one from Red Planet...


Anyway great work so far :bounce:

[Bergquist]

sweet composition! I really like the way the characters are standing and there relation to the camera.. and the backdrop, OMG! this scene is rockin hard! :buttrock:

I really like the lighting for the tube! I didn't quite pick up on those terms either, what program are you in?

Your concept art is beautiful! This is... well, i'm speechless, this scene really will look incredible!

- I've just entered this competition, so hopefully as soon as I get some work finished you'll have a look and let me know what you think. Peace Peace! And I can't wait for the zb update! :thumbsup:

[nakaikoi]

you are really going places with this. I'm sure you get this alot, but I love your concept sketches. Good work with Patricia, she is lookin good.

[morenike]

Sorry I'm posting before i really read your page but it I liked the atmospheric fog in your material test and wanted to know what program you're using.

[tastatura]

hey mate very nice atmosphere, you have here :)
Patricia is getting better and better this would be wonderfull in the end with little final composit and photoshop toucups it will be remarkable :buttrock:

[LightSovereign]

love your hand drawn previz worrk. full of lovely pinks blues around the axis, real sense of it being powered by tremendous energy. Early 3d tests look promising too. nice going

Marley

[ChewyPixels]

Hey Sacha, haven't seen an update from you in a while. C'mon man, let's see something new! :bounce:

[OKMER]

Hey didn't even see this Sacha!!Shame on me!!Sorry you didn't make it.But hey with your excellent 2D entry I forgive you:D:D:D

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