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wharp

10-31-2006, 01:35 PM

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/232846/232846_1162305320_medium.jpg

Title: Kendo warrior
Name: marcin sz
Country: Poland
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

Hello
This is my new work. I used 3d max for modeling and texturing. I used also v-ray for rendering and Photoshop for postproduction. Comments and critique welcome.

Lman

10-31-2006, 09:03 PM

Fantastic render I would like to see a wire.

I love the lighting and textures are top notch.
well done 4 stars from me.
:)

RELAWDA

10-31-2006, 10:33 PM

Fantastic render I would like to see a wire.

:)
Thx............................

trinitycross

11-01-2006, 01:12 AM

This is lovely. I like how stark the surroundings are in contrast with the figure... very nicely done.

Pitipongp

11-01-2006, 02:02 AM

Very nice! wire plz.. :)

wharp

11-01-2006, 05:20 AM

Hi
Here's a wireframe. I know it's not perfect, but I'm still lerning :)

wixtaz

11-01-2006, 08:23 AM

Nice work !!!

CME64

11-01-2006, 09:49 AM

nice work
but u must work hard on the background
3*
good luck

suburbanstudio

11-01-2006, 10:00 AM

nice render but i think you need a better background
dof is really nice

NiZu

11-01-2006, 06:24 PM

Very nice work,
I love kendo, and i think your work really gives the feeling ...Hajime!
Looks Clean and realistic. The only possible crit by me is about the shinai wich looks a bit strange in shape (the bulge at the end is a bit exagerated, but maybe it's a particular kind?) and generally is less detailed than the rest.

wharp

11-01-2006, 08:22 PM

hehe thx NiZu :) you right shinai might by better

Lordstormdragon

11-01-2006, 08:51 PM

...with Nizu about the shinai. I guess I'm just used to the bamboo ones? I think that modeling a bamboo one would be easy for you, and really bring out some realism...

Doronika

11-03-2006, 04:23 PM

I think this could almost pass for a photo, but the floor gives it away. You might want to try adding a really low level and blurry refections on the floor or really soft and low density shadow made by the frames where the light comes through, as it now looks a bit too flat. Just a suggestion :)

I love the depth-of-field.

kage-maru

11-10-2006, 01:06 PM

As a 3d artist I can say to you that the render it's not bad and the feeling that the image produces (thanks also to the good idea of the b&w) is really nice.
But as a kendoka I must say that there are a lot of mistakes if you wanted to reproduce a very photorealistic reproduction ;)

Nice work overall.

wharp

11-12-2006, 09:53 PM

thx kage_maru :)

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