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oma
02-06-2003, 08:35 PM
I made a flash intro. and just stopped a while a go. I haven't added sound, and have a problem with a white line that appears out of nowhere. But im posting it anyway!

http://home.no/oma/badfish.html

:buttrock: So check it out! :buttrock::buttrock:

chepe297
02-07-2003, 01:19 AM
Did you have a white background with a black graphics image. If so, try making the black image bigger so that it fills more than the stage area. Hope you comprehend.

sketchyjay
02-07-2003, 02:56 AM
white background or a line that got added to an edge. look in the symbol for the image that makes up your background.


nice into although it seams to take a while to load.

jay

sketchyjay
02-07-2003, 12:47 PM
the server lost some messages???

i got an email abouit a reply and nothing new is here???


weird

jay

bigray
02-08-2003, 07:19 PM
:wavey: I loved the characters. Very cool style you have there. I would however recomend tweaking the camera and character animation on the pan. If you could start with the camera moving slowly then have the fish come into the shot then use the easing to slow down to a stop it may look better that the sudden stop you have now.

Solesurvivor
02-09-2003, 11:39 PM
-drop the bitmap you used for the floor, or vectorise it
-redo the gradient you used as background
-use fonts instead of bitmaps for "bad" and "fish"

-nice cartoon style for the fish :thumbsup:

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