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embryotic 10-29-2006, 05:52 PM Please do crit - Thanks :thumbsup:
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/5848/jellyshipsmljpgth6.jpg
larger (http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9286/jellyship2cm1.jpg)
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jramauri
10-29-2006, 06:20 PM
Pretty good, great work on colors. I just think the textures on sails should be smaller and a little subtle.
xChrisGx
10-29-2006, 07:14 PM
cool idea, nice colors, i like it. one thing i'd point out is, its hard to say whats going on with the lines on the side of the boat. are some of those lines from the shadow of the jellyfish?
-chris
embryotic
10-29-2006, 07:32 PM
jramauri - good point I noticed that and wondered if I could pass it off to stylization...
xChrisGx - what I did do is overlay more texturing to the hull but you're right they are 2 different textures now fighting with each other ... shadows from the jellyfish? - great idea!
thanks a lot! :thumbsup:
embryotic
11-06-2006, 09:23 PM
as painted over by Stahlberg:
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/2746/jellyshipstahlbergun4.gif
definitely addresses the points mentioned earlier - I need to concentrate on details and better use of colour
Mr Stahlberg - what a legend thanx! :thumbsup:
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