yet another human head

[betelgeuse]

Hi dakone,
It's very elongated with a particularly long nose. That may be what you're shooting for, though. You can never give too much attention to the shape of the eyes - that's the first thing people look at.
Keep going.

[dakone]

thank you for your critique. i stated working on it agin today
tell me what you think

ignore the texture on the eye

[FallenSwordsman]

Hiya

Looking good so far. It reminds me of Easter Island for some reason :surprised

The cheeks could do with rounding out a bit more - they just look a bit flat to me and you probably need to rework the mouth - corners of the mouth are a real sticking point and the lips need to curve around the face more. Think of how your teeth are behind your lips and think how much they curve - your lips should be following that kind of curve.

Looks okay so far.

[dakone]

i think i fixed some major problems , and added more detail
keep the crits coming , its very helpfull

thank you

[FallenSwordsman]

Hi Dakone:

I think the next part to work on is the lower lip. If you look at the side view, the lower lip should be recessed slightly back into the face compared to the upper lip. Think of it this way - everyone has an overbite of some variety, our teeth don't come together exactly when we're at rest, therefore the jawbone with the lower row of teeth will be set slightly back from the top row of teeth and therefore, the lower lips should be set slightly back too. The top of the head is a bit low as well - the eyebrows/eye level should be around the mid point of the head.

Going well!

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