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10-28-2006, 04:02 PM
Hi irina well nice sketch and nice colors as well, composition is good but here is my opinion
I don't completly undestand what we see, is this inside an industrial zone ? or are those buildings?? I think you need more human references or something that tell the viewer how big things are or what kind of elements are we seeing I like the color palette but I'm not sure about the perspective
10-28-2006, 04:07 PM
WTF ! hehe sorry irina I don't know what happened why my post is the first one!!?? :scream:
10-28-2006, 06:49 PM
Hi all.My next work.So, like always qrit respect and i hope u like that!
Thanks a lot!
and my sketch as usual...
10-29-2006, 01:49 AM
Hi Jaime! ha-ha,u above me on a rank:applause:
Thanks Jaime,I think second version better:)
10-29-2006, 04:36 PM
Yes Irina, the second version is better... But still it needs something in the near foreground. Something like platform or a balcony that is similarly lit as the foreground, because the lighting in foreground and the rest of the painting is quite different.
So that we know, that we are standing somewhere and watching the city from above.
My suggestion for the sky is that the lightsource - the yellow part shouldn't be faded and painted over... it then doesn't look like lightsource...
Looking forward to progress!:D
10-30-2006, 06:28 PM
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