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flangust
10-26-2006, 05:35 AM
I've been working on this one for a class. It's suppose to be a futurist scene. I could definitely use some suggestions on what to do.

http://hhive.homedns.org/images/other/future.gif

The factory looking thing is suppose to be a pollution filter, not quite sure how to make it look like it's going into the towers. And any other suggestions would be very helpful. Thanks.

Kutkin
10-26-2006, 03:14 PM
You mean, the smoke is going INTO the towers?
I don't think it would...
For sucking in the smoke polution, different thing would be used...
Something like vacuum cleaners on the sides of that factory.

Otherwise the image looks quite nice:)

cheers

flangust
10-27-2006, 07:34 PM
Yeah the smoke is suppose to go into the towers. And the whole building is like a vaccuum and filter. Here's an update that I did.
http://hhive.homedns.org/images/other/future_2.jpg

JJASSO
10-28-2006, 01:48 PM
flangust I like the idea biut the image needs a lot of work yet,
first of all the perspective is not working in some elements
second and one of the most important things COMPOSITION
the buidings you have are scattered with no sense, you need a better visual composition some thing moe interestin, you focal node will be the factory ri right?? you have some nice architecture concept so take adavantage of it and redo the composition

flangust
10-30-2006, 08:10 PM
Thanks James. I have a very limited amount of time to funush for the class but I'll probably keep working on it afterwards. I have worked on the perspective a little bit. I'm not quite sure what to do with the composition. I have feeling that the factory/air filter should be over to the right, cuz that seems to be where the eye gets drawn.

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