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raultabajara
10-25-2006, 09:06 PM
Hi!

This is a new projetct that I start today.
Im still working in it, but I wanna some comments abou how improve this work.

I friend say me that the neck dont is like a tube. I can correct this. Anyone see anything wrong in this paint?

thanks!
http://www.raultabajara.com/trex-WIP-01.jpg

this is the result of the critc that I get in this post! Really Thanks to all!
http://www.raultabajara.com/t-rex-WIP-02.jpg


THE FINAL IMAGE!!! (but if anyone tell anything to improve, I will change this one!)
http://www.raultabajara.com/t-rex-WIP-03.jpg

Schoende
10-25-2006, 09:11 PM
Oh this one is nice ;). It's cute and cool at a time...

I guess anatomically (for how far you can say that when you look at a comic style drawing) it looks ok to me. The only thing I would change is make the nails of his claws a bit more yellowish they look too white to be true now ;).

Nice work ;)

aldog
10-25-2006, 09:23 PM
I really like that, it's way cute. I have a couple of comments, it looks like where the leg sticks out of the back, it seems like that should curve a bit more towards the neck. And also, where the stomache is, In the middle version the stomache is a bit more noticeable as it curves up, whereas in the big version it doesn't curve as much

RosaJonas
10-25-2006, 09:53 PM
It looks pretty nice, i sure hope you'll take your time cleaning it up and edging it nicely.

if i where to give crits it'll be theese

- the tail seems abit thick, or it throws the flow of the dino abit off imo
- the torso where the arms are located seems abit weirdly angeled, maybe try tweaking the position of the lighter "bellyskin"

Also i hope on your next update youll throw in an nice pupil on the eye

Viking-Heart
10-26-2006, 04:46 AM
haha Gotta love that fella. I really like the way you're painting it.. The only thing I don't quite like is the way you seem to have united the arm and leg, with something like a lttle membrane, or something like that... and the shadow under it makes it look too concave... which is not bad, but I'd suggest using a not-so-dark shadow.. ^^ Everything else looks great, just needs to be polishes up. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing the final piece :thumbsup:

encarregado
10-26-2006, 02:14 PM
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encarregado
10-26-2006, 02:32 PM
hey! second try... good for practicing the bad english.. hehe

very cool dino! :thumbsup:

its funny the adult head in the ''just born body'' hehehe
almost like a clone in the middle of growing hehe


see you later!

frostblade
10-26-2006, 02:33 PM
He reminds me of GON hehe.

nice work.

Maybe make his nails look more sharp and shaded.

raultabajara
10-28-2006, 05:45 PM
Hello!

I wanna thanks all people that crict my work.
I correct all the things that yours say me and now the work is much better!
Thanks a lot.

here is the new WIP of the My T-Rex-Puppy

http://www.raultabajara.com/t-rex-WIP-02.jpg

Bruno-Camara
10-29-2006, 01:59 AM
Hi Taba, that's an original work. I remember when you told to make something like that in 3D. That's nice. My only crit would be about the right leg. it seems a little out of place. looks like it is smaller than the left one. Nice job.

jramauri
10-29-2006, 09:18 AM
It's really f#$%ing amazing concept. I love cartoon figures with a refined shader style, like you're doing here. Pretty good.
I agree with the fellow above, that said the nails of your creature are too white. You could give some yelowish or greenish strokes on them to make a consistent blend between the body and nails. By now, they are looking a bit artificial.
Considering the overall perspective/position, I would say that his right foot should stay a little bit up, to fit better on his laying plane. And that's all!

raultabajara
10-31-2006, 02:07 PM
hello guys!
first I wanna thanks all people that say anything to improve this one. My work realy gone better!

So, I think that stuff is finis. Not to be that anyone give another ideia to improve this work...

this is My Puppy T-REX!
http://www.raultabajara.com/t-rex-WIP-03.jpg
(http://www.raultabajara.com/t-rex-WIP-03.jpg)

feliperod
10-31-2006, 02:43 PM
Nice done! In the first sketches, the nails look like thick paint on canvas and in the last image, it is much more detailed. I just could say about that nail on the top of his left paw, it was supposed to be on the left, not exactly on top of it... but i'm being overcritic on this. Loved the eyes and the skin. =)
Keep it going.

PsiCo
10-31-2006, 02:52 PM
Hey Taba. It's a amazing masterpiece. I loved the glossy eyes, the light and shadow details...and...evenmore, the skin. Very Charming character with a great color pallete.

I will be looking further for more of your matte paint jobs!

keep going, dude!

encarregado
10-31-2006, 04:57 PM
fantastic work on the eye and the sub-surface effect!

put it in a juggle, great wallpaper hehe :thumbsup:

aldog
11-01-2006, 07:03 PM
I LOVE the look of this.
way cute
what's up with the claws on top of the feet though?

scales are great too

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