Character : SpaceGirl+ship

[Temporal]

Wow, that's very nice :) The legs look a little thin from the current angle, but this is a really great piece of work, keep it up :D

[ckw01hk]

it looks like a japanese style. really nice :)
it will better if the depth of field is increase.

[dominicqwek]

Who said there wasnt any replies? got what...
anyway nice work u got there.
The groin area needs more definition
gun not really my cup of a tea but if thats what u want, it looks quite good.

Upper bod looks good 'cept the neck might a tad bit long

cheers

[Maximus Groff]

the ship material is very interesting... its a procedural i believe..

whats the trick (if theres any..)

Good job!

[swords]

;) cool

ah her weapon(gun) is cute haha
and the 'buttons' on her make me wanna press them so badly
oww ~~

nice upper body, the form legs could improve though

texture it fast ! heh

[FallenSwordsman]

Nice scene - although the face looks a bit flat to me. I like the costume as well.

As Dom said - the gun isn't really my cup of tea - looks a bit like a spare part she pulled out of a washing machine, but that's just my taste.

I like the fact that this is a full scene as well, not just another body standing in limbo. Well done.

[Terminator]

Very sleek with a right texture and some lighting this could be great!!!

[Plasticbag]

Hi everybody, Thank you very much for your comments!
I 've try to tweak the lower part of the body. While showing you guys a close up of the face.

Yes I'm also learning how to Light it properly now.

[Plasticbag]

The leg adjustments.

[Temporal]

Wow, that looks really great, I'm impressed :D

It looks as if the curve for the hips starts off to soon, giving it a somewhat sharp look when really the curve should gently ease downwards.
Another thing I noticed was that it looks as if the behind is too high up as well. I'm not sure on that, it just looks that way to me a bit.

Besides the hips, the model is perfect, I can't wait to see it completely textured :thumbsup:

EDIT: Er, except for the gun. I'm sorry, but it just doesn't seem to fit the style of the character . . .

[CENOBITE]

This is looking quite promising! I agree with the hip statement tho... but i like the 'firm butt' look. keep up the good work and post a shot of the ship too.:scream:

[Plasticbag]

Made some minor changes based on the useful comments.

http://www.zanilla.com/images/front7.jpg
and the ship..
http://www.zanilla.com/images/ship_test.jpg

Perhaps i should add in more details and think about the silly gun :)

[Plasticbag]

I forgot to ask. Why dosen' t my uploaded images shows up as pictures but as links...previously it did.

[Isamu7]

Wow, that's a nice model you've got there. great job! :thumbsup:

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