The Giant Snake

[MrAngeles]

there seems to be somthing wrong with the snake's eye lid, it jitters pretty oddly. the foreground greenery seems transparent rather than out of focus. other than that, AWSOME!

[dutchtilt]

i agree:: the foregroud elements look translucent...what are you using to make them out of focus? which comp package?


i think it looks pretty good...something feels strange to me...in regards to the perspective of the snake and tree limbs behind it's head. seems like those limbs are big enough to be closer than the snake...but they are masked out...there isnt much depth there...feels like they are all at the same distance...and if that were the case, those limbs would be interacting with the snake head...

just some thoughts!

[som3d59]

Hey, that's look good! :eek: Just the eye lid and foreground that people mention. I also think the snake's neck (or what it's call) move a little bit weird. I don't sure you want it to breath coz sometimes looks like the snake is breathing. But I rarely see snake breath in reality (well, I guess coz I'm not specialize in snake too). And the last part when he anticipate to attack the man, I think snake's neck can be more extend. But that's depend to what kind of snake you want it to be. Other than that, glad to see people from Thailand in here. :)

[illusion9]

Thanks for all of your critiques.. When I render I for got to close the leave layer. That why the snake eye lid blink.

Thanks you all again

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.