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MrKennedy
10-22-2006, 09:58 AM
Hey Everyone,
This is my second painting I'm working on. Any and all suggestions would be great, thanks!
http://www.joedraws.com/images/Katy01.jpg



A detail of Katy:
http://www.joedraws.com/images/Katy001.jpg

jmBoekestein
10-22-2006, 01:10 PM
hey that's real cute, and the lighting really pops i this picture! Very good work.

budji
10-22-2006, 02:38 PM
great composition and lightning, I would suggest some yellow eyes staring at her in some dark place.

vivien82
10-22-2006, 02:46 PM
hi! nice so far, i like the color scheme and the way you've sketched in the main idea. maybe the big tree in the foreground is a bit distracting from what's going on in the forest though, what do you think?

MrKennedy
10-31-2006, 10:01 AM
Here's an update:

http://www.joedraws.com/images/KatyWIP01.jpg

vivien82
10-31-2006, 10:17 AM
yes! that's looking better already :)

jramauri
10-31-2006, 01:30 PM
Amazing!!! Can you post a step by step or a short tutorial explaining how to achieve such a great lighting effect?

Shadowbrooke
10-31-2006, 03:21 PM
Good lighting! And Katy is really adorable...such a doll! :)

MrKennedy
10-31-2006, 03:24 PM
I added some detail and changed the position of a few things. Any suggestions?

Hey jramauri, sure, lighting on the girl or the atmospheric lighting?Amazing!!! Can you post a step by step or a short tutorial explaining how to achieve such a great lighting effect?

jramauri
10-31-2006, 03:56 PM
Hey jramauri, sure, lighting on the girl or the atmospheric lighting?

If possible, both !!! :scream: Hehehe
If not just the atmosphere is enough. It looks really nice!

MrKennedy
11-04-2006, 08:24 PM
Here's an update. Suggestions would help. Thanks!

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i52/vVMrKennedyVv/WIP02.jpg

MrKennedy
11-14-2006, 01:16 AM
Here's and update. Any suggestions?

http://www.joedraws.com/images/CDP01.jpg

jramauri
11-14-2006, 09:26 AM
I'm a little suspect to say, but in my opinion this piece is perfect since your first post. :)
The only thing that is bothering me a little is the light of lantern, that is looking sparkles, and not coming from a source like a lantern.
But, as I said previously, this work it's great.

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