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donluiG69
10-22-2006, 06:13 AM
heyooo
this here is my 1 st 3d animation. it is a school project for a children's rights promotion.
i really need feedbacks so that i can try to see my weakness.
anyway i hope u enjoy it.

heres the link.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=yGJMRieoyeI
som3d59
10-22-2006, 06:43 AM
The animation of the rabbit doll (look like) look ok, and I get the point you wanna say. The weakest point for me is the charactors. I think the boy's mouth is too wide, and the face shape need lots work. Some part of animation can be faster, like the last part that is more tense. Also the music is too light and dreamy for this. By the way, Keep it up! :bounce:
katana2665
10-22-2006, 03:25 PM
Nice first effort, I don't believe the mouth is that wide since we are dealing with style and not constraint. Think of Pacman. I think the story moves a bit to fast, but other than that, I would say keep going...
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