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dtrimble
02-05-2003, 11:05 AM
Been working on this model a couple days, and really am not happy with any of it yet. I need a good crit to start thinking about the right things, shoot away!

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/girl1.htm

By the way I am shooting for low poly here, and the final being around 7000 polys.
Cabbe
02-05-2003, 12:06 PM
Low poly=7000?

Damn you are lucky! When I think low poly I think 1000 max.

Anyway, here are some of my thoughts!

Make the head smaller. It's way too big.

Make the hands bigger. Try to cover your face with your hand and see how much it covers. Now look at the models hands and compare.

Maybe her shoulders should come a little bit closer together. But now I am being picky.

Otherwise she looks grovvy!:buttrock:
dtrimble
02-07-2003, 11:17 AM
http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/girl2.htm
Same deal, tell me what's up:)
betelgeuse
02-07-2003, 12:39 PM
Looking pretty good. The armpit looks a little too high up which makes the connection of the arm to the body look a little awkward there.
dtrimble
02-09-2003, 10:04 AM
Hey thanks for the crits!

Betelgeuse, I'll work on the arms, they aren't even attached yet, and need some attention.

Cabbe hopefully I have fixed those problems now for the most part.

Here is the update:

http://www.geocities.com/xstin2000/girl3.htm
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