Elf Warrior

[twitchy]

good!:beer: now finish it:annoyed:

[DvD]

c&c??????

[JohnR]

Hey, I like it, I thing it´s a good start:applause: , Keep going :thumbsup:

[edaddy]

crit.
it doesn't look right where the bicep meets the forearm, i think your vein is out of place there, and the section is too flat, when in fact the forearm kind of indents only at the bottom of the bicep. a few minor tweaks to this model and it'll look great

[DvD]

THX AND I WILL TRY TO MODEL BETTER THE ARM ;) :rolleyes:

[DvD]

http://terra.es/personal7/ftornero/elfotextu1.jpg

[DvD]

c&c??????? :thumbsdow

[Temporal]

There's nothing much to crit, you did a very good job on this piece. If you really want me someone to say something though then:

Since this guy is an elf, then perhaps you should make the facial features more delicate. The plaement is good right now, but it hardly gives the impression that this person is a fairy creature. He looks more like a vulcan if anything.

Next point is the ears, which seem to short. Bringing them away from the head and making them longer would add loads to the impresion that this is an elf.

BTW: What a fantastic job on the textures

[Digital Magi]

could we please get an untextured closeup on the face? and a wireframe? You got something there in the eyes and cheeks that I've been trying to capture.

Thanks

[bobakabob]

Great work... :)

[JasonA]

it looks excellent if you ask me. The modeling is superb and the texturing is definitely doing it justice.

I agree that my impression of "elfish" characteristics would be more slender and softer facial features -- but maybe I'm being stereotypical. :D

Tho, that vien on the arm looks out of place to me and way too prominent. Kinda grosses me out actually :wip:

Still overall, its looks great! hell, as far as I'm concerned you're almost done!
:beer:

[DFGFX]

Very nice. Keep working.

Just two little mistakes:
-Ears too sharp
-Nose too sharp

[DvD]

http://terra.es/personal7/ftornero/elfotextu1RX.jpg

[DevonH]

The head looks like it is a part of his head. I don't know if you were going for that, but I don't like it. It should look as though it is a helmet. Just my opinion. The plase that it looks least like a seperate object is in the nose piece.

[JasonA]

true... seems like the helmet should be casting more noticable shadow on the head.

[Digital Magi]

same with the armor on the chain mail at the shoulders

[DvD]

http://terra.es/personal7/ftornero/elfotextu1RXS.jpg

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