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HUIWU
10-16-2006, 02:02 PM
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Title: The benthal love
Name: Xiaohui Ye
Country: China
Software: Photoshop

Hello everyone.
This is my second image here at CG society.I hope you like it though it is not very good.
Any critics are welcome.Thank you.
anshutz
10-16-2006, 09:44 PM
The image are good...but, I belive what it need more "life"...I hope you understand ^^''...also like...hm...more fish...sea life...etc :)
maybe 3 stars?
HUIWU
10-17-2006, 12:56 AM
The image are good...but, I belive what it need more "life"...I hope you understand ^^''...also like...hm...more fish...sea life...etc :)
maybe 3 stars?
Ok,I see.Thanks
Soverign
10-17-2006, 03:48 AM
beautiful painging. I really like the smooth style--reminds me of some of true masters (Freida, anyone?).
My crits:
>Adding more life, as anshutz suggested would help the piece feel more active.
>the green floor at the bottom of the image needs to go. This is a smooth, blue-dominated image. It should stay that way. Blue, blue, blue, blue al the way--ditch the green ;)

Great work, m8!
HUIWU
10-17-2006, 06:57 AM
Soverign :thank for your crits
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