character: Mr. JAW

[Goon]

SaaWeeeet!
That mouth is awesome. I cannot wait to the see the finished product. Have fun:thumbsup:

Jaw seems a little straight.

Just occured to me that no one ever uses :thumbsdow so i just had to. Naturally not related to your model.

[Gianluca]

http://www.studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/ed4gm03.jpg
:surprised

[Gianluca]

:bounce:
http://www.studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/ed3gm03.jpg

[Koma]

whoaaaaa ,he is really cool i like the concept and the modelling alot , what do you plan to do ,just a still ,anim ??

[Corn Dog]

He has a chest plate on right? Cause thats going to hurt his nipples otherwise!

I like, kinda reminds me of Mortal Combat.

[wiemer]

his mouth is superb!!! i really like how you did that!!!
keep it going!

gr. wiemer

[Tellerve]

Very good modeling. I do think the face seems a bit old and so to me the body doesn't match it. He seems like a guy in his 40s or more and the body is some olympian 20 year old. *shrugs*

Tellerve

[mattregnier]

Does he have to suck everything through a straw when he eats? Can I see an open mouth pose if it does?

[mexus]

I do enjoy the character alot.

One of the things that certainly stands out is the rib cage and the six pack of the character. It would be quite beneficial to research the anatomy of a bodybuilder.

I am noticing the area around the biseps and going inside towards the body and the tricep. Needs improvement in smoothing. It appears too pinched and not realistic.


Think about a collar bone to the character.


Hope these comments help you improve your talent.

[strogoff]

Ha ha, the idea to attach these straps to his nipples is great.
The jaw reminds me of a character from the hellraiser movies.

Great model

[Gianluca]

It's a character I designed for a personal project (some sort of 3D comic). I'll surely do some artwork in poster format soon, and I hope to have time enough to do an animation. The character wears a very tight suit, but only in certain parts of the body. The mouth has been modelled step by step...it was quite a mess!

http://studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/bo1gm03.jpg
http://studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/progression.jpg
:surprised
Thanks everybody for the feedback

[ds]

frightning!!

modeling is great
Love the head, Love the body,
but not together.
He looks 'Shit your pants scary' until you look down at his body.

even though it looks as though he's wearing it as a jumper, a kind of cool idea though

[nibo]

The head is sick.....but cool.
Espec. the teeth! Gross! heheh :airguitar

[Gianluca]

entire
http://www.studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/ed1gm03.jpg

[Gianluca]

Software used:
Cinema 4d xl 8 / modellazione - rendering
Adobe Photoshop / post light fx / color correction / texture.

http://www.studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/r5gm03.jpg

[(B-HOLM)]

HOLY SH1T that turned out really impressive!
nice done and nice idea :)

[Corn Dog]

nasty :applause:

[ds]

:argh: he's lookin awesome

:thumbsup: :twisted:

[Lukashi]

Scary!!:thumbsup:

[ThirdEye]

Really really impressive work, fantastic!

Bellissimo Gianluca, complimenti davvero! :thumbsup:

[Gianluca]

-
thanks to all for have appreciate this bad character

http://www.studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/gmartwork03.jpg

to soon

[mister conehead]

bloody good work :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


But i like the close up of the head more than the pictiure of the whole character. Maybe beacuse of it has more detail.

Go on with the good work
:bounce: :buttrock: :bounce:

[Man]

that´s great!!!!!!!!!i just think that he should have more like a rotten appearance....kind of a greyish(??) skin or something..
but still....amazing work

[Gianluca]

Thanks to all for the comments, in attached an other version of the face, appeal to you more?

http://www.studioideabari.it/gianlucamattia/mrjaw/jawtgm03.jpg
:surprised

[(B-HOLM)]

I like him better when he's in a suite :)
Then he looks like some sick superhero :D

[coCoKNIght]

Oah, I've missed this thread completely thou I've seen this pic on your hp.
Once again, excellent piece of artwork! :thumbsup:

[Edouard]

I like the bold one too, but try it with his mouth closed I think that will look better...nice model:argh:

[Maximus Groff]

oh... my... god...

you are a pro...

ok, do u write some tuts ? hehehe if so, post a link ... ;)


its just ***** great!

[elvis75k]

Bravo veramente, peccato che il soggetto sia di cattivo gusto... :thumbsup: :thumbsdow

[coCoKNIght]

Argh, it hurts to look at his teeth! :argh:

[ThirdEye]

Originally posted by Elvis75k
Bravo veramente, peccato che il soggetto sia di cattivo gusto... :thumbsup: :thumbsdow

Io non ci vedo nulla di cattivo gusto sinceramente.

[yomope]

great stuff :bounce:

[baby]

horryfing stuff I've seen here...

the last one is impressive !!!! those blue eyes :drool:

:buttrock: :bounce: :buttrock: :bounce:

[Gianluca]

thanks to all for the comments
ASK for ALL (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=43456&perpage=15&pagenumber=1)

[sanciok]

Gran Bel Lavoro davvero!!!!

[Max4ever]

you have some heavy stuff here...realy nice model ;)

[sys38]

Awesome work!

Dude, how do you sleep at night? No, really?

Sweet!

[robingfx]

wow that is really good! When I look at your pictures my body reacts weirdly, it is kind of freaky. That is a good indication you've hit the nail on the head!

If I were you (which I am not), I would remove some blood from the teeth and his gums. Right now it is totally covered in blood which looks a bit too much. I think it would look good to see different thicknesses to the blood in and around his mouth.

Excelent work though!

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