New Girl

[Werner]

hmmm, I like it alot! especially the shoe design.

how about a nice "out of focus" background?

[HecM]

Well I was hoping for a few more comments but I'll proceed anyways. Thanx for your sugestion Werner, I'm terrible with backgrounds but I might try it. Here is how it all starts. The pencil sketch.

http://www.hecspage.com/Temp/Nemi1.jpg

[Creepstown]

I think its cool. I like the design of the sleeve/glove thing. And the snakes on her pants. Good stuff!

[HecM]

Thanx for your comments Creeptown. Here's the skin and some of the gray tones.

http://hecspage.com/Temp/Nemi2.jpg

[Anim8rJB]

The one thing that stand out from me is that she suffers from the 'flat top' look that a lot of comic characters tend to have. That is, her skull is flat at the top and really couldn't comfortably house a brain. Aside from that, the rest is really well done.

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[Tuan]

cool shoes.....
but the face......ahh.....kind of look like Micheal Jackson face but good work!

[HecM]

Thanx for the comments guys. I do see what you mean by your flat top comment. Once people point things out is easier for artists to notice them. As far as the Michael Jackson comment, I don't see it and I don't appreciate it. Anyways here's the third image.

http://www.hecspage.com/Temp/Nemi3.jpg

[Akuma]

i love this style, this is great work. :thumbsup:

No crits, its awesome

[fayndee]

I like she's design, but it's better to add a background with a fashion city or sometings looks 'cool'... I did know yet!:beer:

Keep improving it, that's much better than always standing in the same place!:thumbsup:

I hope to see your news!:applause:

[tmcbroome]

Hi, I really enjoy seeing the progression of the artwork. I think she looks great... flat top and all ;)

The one detail that catches me at the moment is her left hand. The form does not seem quite right... I know that the style is to soften the forms and lines but the hand seems a bit small and misformed.

Please keep up the wonderful work

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