Eon (Illustration) Entry: Jonas Birkebæk Poulsen

[wildmax]

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Made some pictures to get the feeling of the book out. its from the start of the book.

[nwiz25]

man! love the colour scheme! wanna see the details soon!
the way u conceptualised it is really amazing!

good luck to u mate! :bounce:

cheers! :beer:

[wildmax]

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my love fall on this. where the space shuttle is entering the stone.
I can design the spacecraft + the gate and some men in space suits.

[wildmax]

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the first step on the space suits...

[ramy badie]

This concept is looking really good so far, I am also really looking forward to seeing some detailing! I really like the subdued lighting, just my opinion, I don't think you should go too bright with this at all, the lighting looks very eerie, and maybe some hazy looking areas would add to that overall effect. Good luck!

[wildmax]

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I need some help to get the rigth composition. any feedback will be grateful. thx

[wildmax]

Ramy badie and nwiz25 thx for the comment.

Ramy badie I will try to go for a strong colour mix with dark areas against bright light..

[flatline01]

I'm having a bit of a problem gaining perspective on this. The port hole seems to be big enough for the figuer to stoop into, but certainly not the ship.

It may be that the objects have shadows, but they aren;t casting them onto each other or the enviroment. or maybe the ship should be rotated a bit to put it more in perspective? i know this is a big meteorite, but maybe some other craters or ports off in the distance, so we can get some idea of the size of the object?

compositionally, i like the strong diagonal feel. the colors are ok, i think they need to be pushed a bit, a little more contrast. i think you can push the blues a bit more without losing the moody feel (if thats what you're going for). if you stay with muted colors and a hazy-er background, and keep the ship indestinct, it will push the feeling of depth. sharpen up the figuer and add more detail, and brighter colors, and they will pop a bit. the real advantage to digital, you can try things out without ruining the canvas!

I hope I'm helping :) . this is all meant as constructive crits. i think this can be a strong image if you keep going on it :thumbsup:

[MartinNielsen]

Hey Jonas. Welcome to the challenge :)

Nice drawings, but I agree with flatline01. Keep going.

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