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SomeUnoriginalName
10-08-2006, 10:27 PM
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Title: A Cozy Red Room with Sunset (Michael Gambino)
Name: Michael Gambino
Country: USA
Software: Maya, mental ray

This was a week long class assignment to ultimatly light this 3D room as realisticly as possible using mentalRay.

its a pretty basic space and it was more of a focus study on enhancing my lighting/rendering skills as opposed to modeling.

For a Critique...i would enjoy any kind. I know it still needs work and im willing to take a beating for the sake of my art :).
azynkron
10-09-2006, 12:24 PM
Dude, you need to post a better image.. ok? It kind of looks like an unfinished rendering.
Way to jagged and blurry for us to be able to judge it.
raijonlu
10-09-2006, 07:39 PM
agree with azynkron...
you should turn on antialiasing....

there is a very obvious problem with the three tiny lights over the sofa...
there are too dim...donīt seem to emit light...
the 3 light-sources should be bright...
also there is a socket missing on the very left...

there is no picture in the frame ?!
the parquet needs glossy reflections...

overall more light is needed and distribution of light...

good luck...
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