WIP - Bess

[Fetus the Cat]

This is amazing!! I think you've been dreaming of building a woman in 3-d for years and finally your dream is coming true! Nice work!

[DevonH]

Bump! Does no one have any suggestions or critiscsims at all? C'mon people, anything at all will be of help.

[killahsin]

more creases in the dress. The big toe seems to be a bit to big perhaps just a tad bit smaller

[Araval]

Nice work... I like that sketch (its your own?)
:thumbsup:
Also modeling is good... But one thing: You should change shape of that feet... ie.: I see that this feet is too square on top.
Mayby I mistaken (You know perspective or something) :shrug:

But I give You some reference pic, made by Andrew Loomis.. You will see what generally shape looks like.
http://www.fineart.sk/page186.gif

I wait for head - Keep that way!

[cristili]

Hrrm, yes its a wounderfull character and the modelling of the dress is nice but the feets... they belong on a Cave troll. Perhaps it would be enough to scale down the toes a bit. I don't know, maybe you can look at it.

There you are some critisism :bounce:

[Cabbe]

Could you post a tutorial on your head modeling?? Hahahaah!

Jokes aside, model looks good except feet ofcourse. But I also think you need to do some more work on the boobs. They look like man breasts almost. But yes I have tried to model female boobs too and they are as hard to model as they are tempting to touch! (For modeling reference purposes ofcourse!)

But you are almost done, keep it up!!!:bounce:

[TheFreak]

What is beginning to scare me is the fact that Cabbe seems to know so much about man breasts. That is unless he is a she or they (like myself) have been blessed with a matching pair of masculine breasticuli (hey that almost sounds like they are suppost to be there). Hey i love my saggy man breasts and i bet your all jealous now........

ok so down to the crits....sorry for the previous drivvle. It's looking good, i agree that the big toe is a bit to big and the foot kinda looks masculine in apperance, and although i am dubious to Cabbe's research material i believe he is correct with the man breast assumption.

but keep up the fantastic work, can't wait to see this one complete.

[Cabbe]

Hey Freak!

My body is my tempel! And I keep it WELL stuffed at all times!!! Or maybe I'm just trying to hide the gut under my man breasts.

Hahaahah, but hey why have a sixpack when we can have a kegg!!:thumbsup:

[DevonH]

Awesome, thabx a lot guys and gals... I appreciate the crits. I'll work on the modifications. As I have classes for the rest of the week, it may take me until next weekend to complete them. You're all right about the feet. You should have seen them before... they look very feminine compared to what I had previously. Oh well, I think I know how to fix them.

Once again, thanx.

DevonH

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