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GaseousSnake
10-06-2006, 06:35 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/7135/distortionfg0.jpg
^(click) (http://gaseoussnake.cgsociety.org/gallery/414025/)

Well, this pic is actually finished. But, since it was my first serious colored drawing, i'm going to redo it, cause i've improved my skills since i made it.

So i'm here to ask you what I should change, improve, delete. :D
Arney
10-06-2006, 07:15 PM
Well the thing that sticks out most to me is her hand. Somthing about it isn't right. Try touching the colors up first and if that dosen't work then try re-drawing it a little bit. Because that hand dosent look like a womans hand to me. :)
GaseousSnake
10-06-2006, 07:22 PM
yeah, lol, i must admit that the hand is nasty because of my lazyness. :D so i'll redraw it, definitely.
RaresH
10-07-2006, 03:19 AM
I like the style you have going here. You can work in some more brush strokes but i think you should keep some lazy brush srtokes as it seems to be part of the character I just like the look and I'm affraid if you try to polish it up too much you may lose the flare. I find that when I'm in a hurry I tend to make more happy mistakes. Perhaps you could give some more occlusion, that is to say darken areas where multiple surfaces are closer together.

If you worked fast on this one. I think maybe you should continue working fast so that the look is consistant. You know what I mean?


Good job friend. Looking forward to seeing this one complete.
GaseousSnake
10-07-2006, 01:59 PM
I like the style you have going here. You can work in some more brush strokes but i think you should keep some lazy brush srtokes as it seems to be part of the character I just like the look and I'm affraid if you try to polish it up too much you may lose the flare. I find that when I'm in a hurry I tend to make more happy mistakes. Perhaps you could give some more occlusion, that is to say darken areas where multiple surfaces are closer together.

If you worked fast on this one. I think maybe you should continue working fast so that the look is consistant. You know what I mean?


Good job friend. Looking forward to seeing this one complete.Yeah in fact my intention was to redo it all in photoshop (cause, if you notice, the actual lineart is a scanned pencil work) and put a layer on the top with a sketchy looking, handmade, lineart. That would add a bit of "lazyness" to the image, plus of course i won't use a clean style; but for example, i will make hair a a single black shape made with faded brushes, which i was not able to do at the time.

thx for the advices anyway :)
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