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Opeth
02-02-2003, 02:33 PM
Hey ppl.
i've been working on this model for a long long time.. just half an hour here, 15 minutes there.. only in the past few days i started to really work on it properly.
i tried to make it anatomicly correct, & u can see that by the wire too (build along muscle lines).
anyway, before i go on, i'd like some crits please, especially anatomical & proportional opinions please.
(oh.. done in max5, rendered with Brazil.. you gotta get brazil!!)

here's a short spin view, though its not 100% updated:
www.davids-gallery.com/Comp1.avi

here are the images & wire of the control mesh:

http://www.davids-gallery.com/bleh10.jpg

http://www.davids-gallery.com/bleh11.jpg

http://www.davids-gallery.com/bleh15.JPG

http://www.davids-gallery.com/bleh12.jpg

http://www.davids-gallery.com/bleh13.jpg

http://www.davids-gallery.com/bleh14.jpg
Stimpy
03-02-2003, 02:23 AM
model looks good so far...

only thing that looks funny to me is the neck, which seems a bit too long.. and maybe you could use some more edgeloops around the eye, for animation, but maybe as well as to form a proper brow which she kind of seems to be missing
struggler
03-02-2003, 04:49 AM
I cant member the last time ive seen one of those naked...so Im pretty much no help...

All I can tell you is that shes too symetrical. Especially noticable in the neck, breasts and the lower back dimples. Other then that shes looking great.

Specially love the nipples...who doesnt?

-struggler
AtrusDni
03-03-2003, 05:05 AM
I'd have to agree with Stimpy, the neck seems a tad bit too long, other then that though, it looks pretty good.
DeFnoTmAniA
03-03-2003, 06:19 AM
nice start.... :)
ninernut
03-09-2003, 09:40 PM
:beer: Great work!!
The only thing you might want to work on is the eyes. Try making the eye lid more defined. Other than that great work!!
ostov
03-09-2003, 10:52 PM
Wow, that is very good work u got there Opeth, but what is up with her ass?? (Those lines) Anyway good work:thumbsup:


ostov
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