Female character wip

[Caman0]

cant see the pic :(

AHUM...can now....

looks quite nice, maybe a bigger pic for the detail?

[DeViSoR]

if you click on the pic you get to se the bigger version.

[DeViSoR]

uhm no comment?

[Integer]

Overall model looks good..
But there is something with her eyes..
Dunno.. She doesn't seem to look straight.

For a still image the hair looks good BTW

[DeViSoR]

thx.. honestly I can't se whats wrong with them.. :shrug: might be the camera angel?

[seenote2000]

looks great!! maybe the breasts should be closer together though

[DeViSoR]

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_texture2.jpg

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_texture3.jpg

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_texture4.jpg

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_texture5.jpg

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_texture6.jpg

some update.. I'll remember the brests next time ;)

[chrisdejoya]

something about the hips in the second pic...they seem to narrow. besides that, pretty decent musculature. good job. ;)

(this thread feels like voyeurism...)

[DeViSoR]

voyeurism? (sorry.. don't have a dictionary near by).

[Temporal]

Not bad, especially the hands. She looks unnaturaly thing from the side view however, and her arms are far to small.

The ears also look improperly formed, particularly the bottom part. This is possibly because it's too rounded out there.

The behind also looks strange, perhaps the cheeks aren't supposed to be touching, but I'm not sure. Other than that, it looks pretty good. Keep it up.

[Reflex55]

looking good. The proportions seem just fine to me. MAybe the texturing is causing her to look unnatural. Anyway, my only small gripe that I have about her is the hair in the first post. It doesn't sit right at all.

[DeViSoR]

Hehe.. looked the word up ;)

I'll try to tweak the ear a bit... modelled them after Angelina J..

The texture is werry temp.. trying to make a better uv-map for her first.

[DeViSoR]

ok learned a bit more about texturing :)


http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_face_texture_03.jpg

c&c

[Dusk108]

Pretty good. Still if you want some crits.
Someone comments on the hips looking narrow already. They are a little. usually women's hips are wider than their upper torso, in contrast to men who have narrow hips and broad shoulders. only other comment i have is that her lips seem a little wide.

Still it is good. modeling a human figure is the hardest thing to do, especially women since us guys spend so much time staring at them.

[DeViSoR]

ok any suggestion on making the texture better?

[Temporal]

Not much to be said on the textures. Perhaps adding some more imperfections in the skin will help adding the necessary realism to the model.

Something I noticed with the head just now.
The mouth appears to be too wide, and looks unnatural especially at the corners. I'm not sure how you would fix this, just letting you know about it.

[DeViSoR]

ok better?

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/female_face_texture_05.jpg

[JasonA]

thats definitely pretty good. Although I have to admit, I think I like the other texturing scheme better than this one. This ones seems just a tad too yellowish. perhaps some halfway point between this and the older one would be good. And I agree about the lips, they do seem a bit wide still.

I think the body is pretty darn good tho, good job!

I don't know what app you're using but I thought Stahlbergs tut on skin shading was really interesting.. check it out
http://www.androidblues.com/shadetut.html

[DeViSoR]

texture 100% completed (face make up might be changed when hair is done)
modelling clothes 10% done
redoing hair
medelling teeths.. (need to learn)

http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/texturecompleted_icon.jpg (http://home.online.no/~devisor/temp/female_character/texturecompleted.jpg)

[DeViSoR]

Hi c'mon this is my first advance texture work.. :love:

click the image and let me know what u think..

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