Eon (Illustration) Entry: diego borellini

[TheFirstAngel]

nice to see you in :D viel glück und spass und gnüss de flug ^^hehe, this is goin to be fun, let it rock mate!

[Rebeccak]

Hey there,

Good luck to you! :)

[coCoKNIght]

Sali zweiDee, lol

cool nick, crappy avatar (you'll have to work on that), lol, good luck, have fun, don't stop having fun :) and therefor create something astonishing for us to happily consume :)

greetings from one of your fellow landmates who wishes you all the best! :)

[TheFirstAngel]

rofl cocky nite ^^ lol so fies! ^^

Diego: go go go, wanna see sum pixels enlight this palce! :bounce::bounce::bounce:

[zweiDee]

haha, when im back from the holydays:D
i show some scetches...

[zweiDee]

details...:shrug:http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/4922/scetchdetailsfz2.jpg

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1160954326_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1160954326_large.jpg)

thumbnails and initial sketches, experimenting with different styles landscapes and technology designs.

[TheFirstAngel]

very nice sketches mate, composition 2 4 and 5 rock, love those landscapes and technology elements. since landscape is having great movement and contrasts already, a calmer sky would help it to let the eye focus on the great landscape :)
keep up the great works, keep on rocking!

[nwiz25]

gosh! this is really good! wanna c this materialize big time!:eek:

cheers dude! n good luck to u! :thumbsup:

[coCoKNIght]

hey hey hey. Me likey all! :)
especially nr. 3. I think it has the most potential (epic, iconic n'stuff...)

:thumbsup:

PS. cool avatar! :)

[Grin3d]

hello diego! good start with very nice sketches here. good luck with the challenge!

roman grin3d

[ramy badie]

awesome sketches, I love how dynamic #3 looks, but I also like the compositions of 4 and 5 :) Good luck in the challenge, looks like you are off to a good start.

[zweiDee]

thx guys for the friendly compliments.
i will paint later, today im to tired for painting. the holidays was so stressful. :D

:buttrock:<< this is my favorite smilie^^

[TheFirstAngel]

thx guys for the friendly compliments.
i will paint later, today im to tired for painting. the holidays was so stressful. :D

:buttrock:<< this is my favorite smilie^^

poor thing, hope you retired well from those evil holidays... glad i had none then ^^ :scream: :p

[Erklaerbar]

cool sketches! Lets see some more, zeigne wo de bartli de moscht holt.:thumbsup:
Ehm, Kritik? ganz klein wenig: http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goldener_Schnitt
Ein bisschen weg von der Mitte könnte gut tun. Ansonsten, guck ich gern spaeter wieder rein. Viel Spass!

Cheers

[OKMER]

Amazing thumbs!!!This is really promising hot stuff coming in here!!!
Love pic (, the perspective is great!
Good luck mate!

[zweiDee]

thx guys, it's my first challange i look foward for a great time. at the moment i paint analog scetches, updates coming soon.

Erklaerbar: Danke für deinen Tipp mit dem Goldenen Schnitt.

Cheers >~(.°°)~<

[TheFirstAngel]

pfffff*sodeli wodeliwo kritzelskizz?* sigh :rolleyes: , came to check for updates, better speed this thing up man! ahahah "t minus 12, 11, 10... zweidee, are you ready to take off?" fire it up mate!

[zweiDee]

ja dä angel. alles no analog, scann das morn i. muss zerscht en scanner chaufe. hrhr

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1167935382_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1167935382_large.jpg)

*6th chamber*
perspektive examples and three concept sketches for the scene.
1a: bridge, tanks in the back, pumps and left ou see the glas building. 1b and 1c its the same, but little different compostition.

[Thaldir]

Personally I think 1c has the best composition. 1 a doesn't do anything for me, and 1b has my eye gliding off the page almost immediately.

Good luck for the Challenge!

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1167935798_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1167935798_large.jpg)

*6th chamber*

thumbnails for the 6th chamber.
one setch is a idea for a movie poster
you see the mainchars, patricia, lanier, frant, olmi, mirsky and a worker :)
in the top you see axis city, 6th and 5th chamber in individual frames.

[zweiDee]

double post. grrrr

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1167936278_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1167936278_large.jpg)

more thumbnails

/Time left: 11 days, 5 hours, 19 minutes, 12 seconds.

ahaha, ok,.... 11 days aha, where is my time machine?! damn i need more time. i make always my work in the last minutes^^

[ChuckWadey]

Man, these ink sketches are great. You look like a pure designer. I hope you'll have time to do something awseome.

[zweiDee]

i will make the movie poster.

- chuck >>
thx for the compliment. i looked your homepage, you rock dude!!! awsome stuff, i like your style very much. maybe you can me give some tipps. :thumbsup:

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168020807_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168020807_large.jpg)

the three chambers / axis city / 6th chamber and the 5th chamber. and the charakters position

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168036258_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168036258_large.jpg)

final scetch & idea for the title

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168055211_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168055211_large.jpg)

5th chamber. line art. more details coming next. line art > 60% finished

[TheFirstAngel]

kewl stuff promssing start on the coloring :) keep on rocking mate :)

[coCoKNIght]

Hey Diego

cool Thumbnails and Sketches, they're somehow loose yet accurate. The method reminds me of Feng Zhu. Do you also have some gomon dvd's? :)

The lineart has a beautiful sky and stylish rocks. I like it! Only thing, I don't think the view of the plasma tube matches the descriptions in the book, but who cares... :)

[zweiDee]

- Angel>> thx for the nice words!

- coCoKNIght>> Yes i have Gnomon DvDs, Feng is one of my Favorit Artists. Maybe im Inspirated from him. But the Style is mine, i hope so^^. I dont wanna copy a Artist.

[leving]

Super clean line work man. It's crazy how much information you can convey with such a limited color palette. It's looking really nice so far, I'm anxious to see more progress.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168232317_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168232317_large.jpg)

line art (not finish)
and color test

[TheFirstAngel]

great and clean start
make sure you get the values right early, so you get as much atmospherical feel as possible in it to not end up in a cold architectural illustration. great start mate. keep on rocking! :beer::buttrock::wip:

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168300944_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168300944_large.jpg)

axis city update. shadow and light i must make better, but the design and the style its ok. next step i make the 6th chamber and later i making axis finish.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168306187_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168306187_large.jpg)

6th Chamber - Concept Design
Worker - Concept Design

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168318917_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168318917_large.jpg)

new charakter postition...

[OKMER]

Hey Happy inspirating new year mate!
Such a nice,clean and pro way ,you work yourself to finish man!!!
Whooo, so nice!Maybe push a bit further some texturing here and there to bring in some more life.Good luck on the last run!
:beer:

[zweiDee]

thx, happy new year too ! more textur to be added.

today: finsih line art 5th and 6th chamber / axis, shadow and light ( more texture)
10.01: coloring & texturing 5th and 6th chamber > light & colortest ( maybe i can this today )
11.01: charakter designs ( lineart )
12.01: charakter > coloring
13.01: compostition tests / last details
14.01: the last steps to finishing the piece
15.01: finishing, the last little details.

[coCoKNIght]

A cool update and a tight shedule. I like those worker sketches!

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168407757_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1168407757_large.jpg)

Update 6th Chamber. Line Arts, Color and Textures. - Next Step Line Art finish, more texture, light and shadow. Snow, rain and more workers for a living atmosphere.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1169773000_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1169773000_large.jpg)

Oh cool, we have more time, hmm i think i making a new one:) Ok here is the 6th chamber, from the scetch till the line art and the first color pass. its a diferent style, i playing more with the lines an graphic forms. more technical stuff coming... i hope you like it, constructive crits are very welcome.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1169836800_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1169836800_large.jpg)

more texture and another patricia (im not so happy with the position from patricia).
crits are very welcome... :)

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1169901590_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1169901590_large.jpg)

Update. More machines, reflection on the buildings. light > color test. on the top first scetch from the machine carpet.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170019354_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170019354_large.jpg)

New Composition. On the left side you see the buildings, right the machines. Im play little bit with the font, i intergrated the title in the buildings.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170026391_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170026391_large.jpg)

color test and i dismissed the building. (i hope i say this correct, my english its not so good).
crits are very welcome. thx.

[coCoKNIght]

I think B is more thrilling than a colorwise. When I looked through the images on this page I thaught that the first one has more depth than the others. So maybe try to stress that element again on your next update? :wavey:

[TheFirstAngel]

b, great color contrast, if sky from a - just my thought :)

[coCoKNIght]

Yep, I agree that sky from A on B could be cool ;)

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170037019_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170037019_large.jpg)

who is the new worker?

[zweiDee]

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3280/gregbearbm3.jpg
the new worker! :)

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170076985_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170076985_large.jpg)

rain, snow and a rainbow.

[Norberg]

I think you loose much of the depth in the scene with that yellow in the distance. I would keep that area cool as in sketch B.
Now the platform has the same value as the skyscraper to the left so the only thing suggesting it´s closer is the size of the worker. In B you have a warmer tone on the skyscraper that seperate them well.
I like the snow but the rainbow is a bit too much.

These are just minor colorchanges but I think they would do much for the readability. especially if you bring back the warmer tones down on the skyscraper.

Good luck!

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170126428_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170126428_large.jpg)

Final composite. So next I painting the last details. Crits are very welcome.

[zweiDee]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170255958_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/14/11754/11754_1170255958_large.jpg)

This is the 6th Chamber, I taked more machines and buildnings as in the original story, you see the glass skyscraper and right the pumps and machines, left the buildings. the worker in the yellow raincoats and patricia, she go ahead to the skyscraper. i choise this chamber, than I like machines and futuristic stuff. I choise this colors than blue is a cool colour and look like metal, and the gold and red tones is a nice contrast. Im happy with this, its my first finished piece I did it with photoshop. Thanx all for your comments, special thanx to Angel. It was a very nice Challange and a great Book! Cheers

[TheFirstAngel]

congrats on your early finish mate and best of luck on the finals. great to see you brought this to a great level considering the short time you moved on this piece. i'll see ya round on msn or some couchpotatoeing ^^ rock on!

[coCoKNIght]

Congrats! Though I was a bit surprised not seeing your 3 images togeter in the final image... even more because the final image is the one you started as last... but it's a nice image and I wish you good luck with the judges, may the gods be with you or summthin :)

[nwiz25]

congratulations on ur finishing dude! :scream::applause::D ur entry has a very artisitic look! :love: very very cool! :p

wishing u the very best of luck dude! :thumbsup:
cheers! :beer:

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