Eon (3D Scene) Entry: Laeticia Freger

[flaeticia]

yoooooooooooooo :D

now its time to work !
Good luck to everyone, and dont forget to spamm :D

[Zapan]

YEAH BABY !!!

Have a lots of fun and best of luck !
*I will try to explain you the subject if I can ... * :D

cheers ,

-Zapan

[flaeticia]

YEAH BABY !!!

Have a lots of fun and best of luck !
*I will try to explain you the subject if I can ... * :D

cheers ,

-Zapan

hanhan :D

thanks steph' the best for u too :D
:bounce:

[gpepper]

Nice to see U here Girlie !
I hope to see U finish it, this time !

[DaddyMack]

*Snaps fingers and waves hand* You go girlfriend;)

I always enjoy your style Laeticia

[JamesMK]

Awrightie then! Just get cracking, it'll work out great you know

[irananimator]

Best of luck to you Laeticia! Have fun!

Hamed katebi

[OZ]

START SPAMMING!!!. . . ^_^ Lol...

Good luck for challenge mrs.

[Gunilla]

Hey there - good luck to you Laeticia :thumbsup:

[Rebeccak]

Best of luck to you! :)

[Lemog]

And the Pupuce is here too... so fine... maybe you can finish here your pied-à-terre :scream: maybe a futuristic flying one :D hahahaha...
Sorry... seriously... I wish you much fun, and especially much progress...

...and now, you must finish this one... for the community, for your friends, for me... and especially for you :thumbsup:

Go now...

[gpepper]

And the Pupuce is here too... so fine... maybe you can finish here your pied-à-terre :scream: maybe a futuristic flying one :D hahahaha...

Mouahah ! Pied à terre from space !

[jddog]

Dis donc lolo... pupuce c'est moi qui dis, pas toi, nah ! :p ... hahaha...

salut falbala ! really nice to see you here, wish you all the best !

juju ;)

[jddog]

YEAH BABY !!!

Have a lots of fun and best of luck !
*I will try to explain you the subject if I can ... * :D

cheers ,

-Zapan

tu connais le book ???? wow ça aiderait un poil...

[TheFirstAngel]

great to have you here too :) bonne chance et beacoup de plaisir! lets go nuts:D again ^^
:beer::buttrock:

[flaeticia]

Hi everyone !!
Thanks for whole of your kind words of encouragement ! very very touchin'

Now for me its time to read the book :D
so hard :D :scream::thumbsup:
ill try to be efficient at this point of work, to start correctly with the good ideas, and of course, something which i can realize !
:)

[flaeticia]

great to have you here too :) bonne chance et beacoup de plaisir! lets go nuts:D again ^^
:beer::buttrock:

hey u :D
so cool to spam my thread :D

thanks dude :) so nice !
good luck to u too :)

[ChewyPixels]

Ah, a familiar face. Great to have you on board again, Laeticia. Good luck to you. :)

[makaron]

wish you luck too..

and a lot of fun :bounce: and psst. tell me what the book is about.. haha

CYA

[flaeticia]

wish you luck too..

and a lot of fun :bounce: and psst. tell me what the book is about.. haha

CYA

hey thankssssss for the support :D
so sweet :)

for the book its :o so complex :shrug: 515 pages !! lots lots of little letters :D
and ... i already explain to zapan, hanhan :D i didnt have the book :D so bad start hahahaha :D
big joke of course, everybody knows, hes my friend :applause:

[Zapan]

big joke of course, everybody knows, hes my friend :applause:

Not anymore .... :D

[flaeticia]

Not anymore .... :D

are u sure ?

thats not what u tell me ... there is ... 10 minutes :scream::thumbsup::love:

hanhan

would u like i call mc adrian :buttrock: ahahaha :D
or my sista :twisted::twisted::twisted:

[flaeticia]

And the Pupuce is here too... so fine... maybe you can finish here your pied-à-terre maybe a futuristic flying one hahahaha...
Sorry... seriously... I wish you much fun, and especially much progress...

...and now, you must finish this one... for the community, for your friends, for me... and especially for you

Go now...


yessss im here :D

You know, for the "pied à terre", this morning, when im taking my breakfast, i had said :" today, ill texture the "pied à terre" ... thats really what i say, but but when i swith on my computer, i see this challenge, so i say : hmm no, its not for today :D
But ill finish it !
I hope ill find courage to finish it, and of course to make this little animation :D
Now, i think u can participate too u know i have anything for you :
a little train, and a fly boat, move towards an asteroid very close to the river called: the Seine :D

now, u must have an entry ... and work :twisted::twisted::twisted: ahahah :D

;)

thanks for the support ure nice :)

kisses

[Darksuit]

best of luck!

[Nomad]

Bonne chance / Good luck :thumbsup:

And have alot of fun :bounce:

[SweD]

I will follow your project for sure :) have funny time with this challenge, and count on my subscribe to this thread. ;)

Cheers

[gpepper]

now, u must have an entry ...

You are dreaming ! Laurent will not join us this time...

[PrincessSarah]

ouzzzz back ??

me :Doff course !
hey sista dats so stylee everything all right :)
ull win im sure

now im gonna write some kind words on zanpan :D ahahaha :D
hanhan
dats so stylee :D

[Nothingness]

this is gonna be fun !! :bounce:

[Dravenfr]

Allez , moi aussi j'y vais de mon petit mot d'encouragement en français ...

Allez Laeticia ... go go go ... ( mince c'est en anglais ca !! )

[Lemog]

i think u can participate too u know i have anything for you :
a little train, and a fly boat, move towards an asteroid very close to the river called: the Seine :D

now, u must have an entry ... and work :twisted::twisted::twisted: ahahah :D
hahahahaha... very good idea... like that, I can be sure you doesn't already read the book :scream:

and welcome here to your sister :thumbsup:

[flaeticia]

hahahahaha... very good idea... like that, I can be sure you doesn't already read the book :scream:

and welcome here to your sister :thumbsup:

ure right :D
i dont start to read this big book :D
thats a good idea for sure :D, i think u need to think about it !
thats a good pipeline for all of your tests ... ;)
to meditate !

[Crin]

Hello again Laeticia. Good luck with this, here's hoping we both manage to finish. :thumbsup:

[OreoJackson]

I'm reading the book too! Let's race! :thumbsup:

[SantoAnderson]

Saludos,
Good luck in the challenge.... I really, REALLY need to learn french....

[TheSoracle]

Best of luck Laeticia. Hope to see some great work :D

[rattlesnake]

Hello, i wish u good luck with this one :) ill be following the progress :)

[Climax]

Good luck to you Night Girl :), happy to see u in a new challenge, see u around!

[adonihs]

good luck on this! =)

[Elendil_le_Grand]

Good luck Laeticia ;)

[flaeticia]

yeah everybody :D
so happy to see this support ! thats so nice !
thank you very much !
im so touched !

ive started to read the book, yesterday night, and its so hard, very hard for me, but, thats not a large book which will disconcert me :thumbsup:

[daWinky]

Hi Laeticia!

Looking through your thread I'm sure there's no need to wich you fun:D : You already have a lot of!:thumbsup:

So just my best wishes for you, good luck!

-sabrina

[flaeticia]

Hello again Laeticia. Good luck with this, here's hoping we both manage to finish.


hey you ! thanks ! i ll try to finish this time :D

Good luck Laeticia

thanks ! good luck to you too !



good luck on this! =)

thanks


Good luck to you Night Girl , happy to see u in a new challenge, see u around!



hey climax !
so happy to see u on my personnal thread
thats so kind of ure part

thanks, hope this challenge will good for u too :)


Hello, i wish u good luck with this one ill be following the progress

hey georges ! thanks for ure ! good luck to you too !!


Best of luck Laeticia. Hope to see some great work

thanks u
i hope ill dont disappoint u :)


Saludos,
Good luck in the challenge.... I really, REALLY need to learn french....

yo !
good luck boy !
ure right ! u need to learn french asap thats a great language so complicated :D ahahah



I'm reading the book too! Let's race!

yeah !!! lets gooooooo :D




i finish to englobe :D (zanpan's stylee) ahahah

[flaeticia]

Hi Laeticia!

Looking through your thread I'm sure there's no need to wich you fun:D : You already have a lot of!:thumbsup:

So just my best wishes for you, good luck!

-sabrina


hi sabrina :) :)

ur words touch me a lot !
thats very nice !
thank you !!!
ure so sweet with me :)
very happy about that !
you know i like the challenge because, i improve my personal skills, and i laugh a lot with all of my friends !!!

dont be affraid by us ! join the spamming group :D

;)

[flaeticia]

ouzzzz back ??

me off course !
hey sista dats so stylee everything all right
ull win im sure

now im gonna write some kind words on zanpan ahahaha
hanhan
dats so stylee

ouz back
hanhan :D

yo little sista :D

so crazy girl u R :D
ull be try to rap in the classroom, rather than reply trick like this :thumbsup::scream::scream:
zanpan need support :wise: lots of difficulties about the reading part :D ahahaha :thumbsup:

[Zapan]

zanpan need support :wise: lots of difficulties about the reading part :D ahahaha

I'm gonna take that book .... and beat you to death with it .... :twisted:

[flaeticia]

I'm gonna take that book .... and beat you to death with it .... :twisted:

stop fantasize on my body small man :wise::twisted:

[KrotArt]

good luck to you flaeticia :)

[Lemog]

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zanpan need support :wise: lots of difficulties about the reading part
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It's new that... because you're better than him now ? :scream: hahahaha

[Zapan]

It's new that... because you're better than him now ? :scream: hahahaha

Thank you .... no wait ... that's not a compliment for me neither :curious: .... :scream:

[flaeticia]

It's new that... because you're better than him now ? :scream: hahahaha

already alzheimer ? its not me which will soon receive a licence of XSI :D

[flaeticia]

good luck to you flaeticia :)

good luck to you to boy !

[gpepper]

52 posts ?
t'as décidé de battre le record de Steph pendant Journey ?

Do you decide to beat steph's record during Journey begins ?

[flaeticia]

52 posts ?
t'as décidé de battre le record de Steph pendant Journey ?

Do you decide to beat steph's record during Journey begins ?

beat beat ... doucement :D :bounce::eek:
ahahaha :D

non je sais pas, ça grandi tout seul !
Mais ne t'inquiète pas ça va diminuer quand ils vont voir la mod :D ahahaha !

i dont know that grow up oneself :eek:

[scootermaya]

Hey Laetitia !
Good luck girl . I'm subscribing to your future masterpeice.

[flaeticia]

Hey Laetitia !
Good luck girl . I'm subscribing to your future masterpeice.

yoooooooooooooo !
good luck to u too :D
:)

[flaeticia]

Hi everyone !
Hope everybody are ok on this friday : soon two days of relaxxxx :thumbsup:
Yesterday evening, i started reading the book, and its not an very easy task, because its very typed masculine style, and there is a lots of mathematics and physics details, but there is a lots of environnement details too !! !!
So i read the part when Patricia and the boy are in the second chamber.
I like this chamber because its very architectural, and there is special concept there.
There is two scene i like in this chamber : the first when Patricia discover the large road, with all of this stores. I like another scene when she read the first book in this special librairy.
I like this two scenes so ill procede like this :
- Ill make two sketches and ill post it here.
- Ill continue to read the book and as I met interesting scenes, Ill make a sketches etc . . .

Hope you like this way of working !

So soon the first sketch :)

have a nice day :thumbsup:

[Elendil_le_Grand]

Yes i think it's a good workflow. I thinked to do the same thing but i don't have yet this book.
I'm waiting for this sketch ;)

[Lemog]

héhé... thanks for the first informations about the story... of course very usefull :thumbsup: good courage for the continuation then... :scream: et bonne lecture...

[gpepper]

T'es sur que c'est pas un recueil de nouvelles ? ça me parait bizarre qu'il fasse 500 pages...

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160123501_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160123501_large.jpg)

So now the first sketch ! As you can, see (or as you know ;)) im not good at this skill, so its a very basic sketch to find the dynamics and the first concept of this abandonned city.
Hope you like it :)

[flaeticia]

i think that the second sketch will come this afternoon :)

now ... start spamming :twisted::twisted::thumbsup:

ahahahah :twisted:

[SweD]

yeah ! first sketch ! gnark ! This is not my best skill too, so I'll don't throw you the first stone ! (aouch the literale translation... :scream: )
It'll be interesting to see what kind of architecture you'll use :) Keep on the sketch work :thumbsup:

[scootermaya]

Good start girl :thumbsup: keep going, you 've got your idea :bounce:

[NH]

Good luck :)

[Climax]

Good start! the only thing is that I see the city too much like an actual city of our time, of course they are humans and builded as we should, but with higher technology, i suggest more extrange design, metal and glass all around, waiting for that new concept this afternoon :buttrock:
cheers

[scootermaya]

Good start! the only thing is that I see the city too much like an actual city of our time, of course they are humans and builded as we should, but with higher technology, i suggest more extrange design, metal and glass all around, waiting for that new concept this afternoon :buttrock:
cheers

Arf ! :applause: good point ! hihi, how about the same city upside down ? :scream: (ok I'm leaving)

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160150471_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160150471_large.jpg)

All right !
There is a close up from the library, when Patricia start to read the first book "Tom Sawyer".
Its a close up because i dont start in my head the design of this special library.
If i do this scene, ill work on it off course :)

Hope you like it !

[gpepper]

Organic modeling ? mmmmmhhh...
great challenge for U !

[Nothingness]

Organic modeling ? mmmmmhhh...
great challenge for U !


organic because the focus is on the character of Patricia?

wel, it wouldn't be fun otherwise, would it?



ps. the french really stick together :thumbsup: nice to see such connection and a solid group of friends. I almost feel like a neighbour :argh:
and if you get mad on the skeching part, try working with volumes, light, shadow and perspective.


good luck.

[agou]

Hi flaeticia!
That's great to see you participating in this new challenge. Of course, I hope you will go as further as possible - even achieveing it (that's my purpose too :) ). Here we go with another spam thread! But that's the part of fun in these challenges.
Don't worry, I have to read the book too - I read it a loooong time ago, I can't even recall if I read it totally. That's a shame, but I read pretty fast, so that won't be a problem.

Bon courage!:bounce:

[OZ]

I like the first concept...waiting for more.
(uh! gals'n'guys this thread is crazy!) :scream:

[TheSoracle]

Like both concepts although first is a bit better. Good luck and cant wait to see modelling.

[TheFirstAngel]

Lu Jolie :)

well both look having quiet much potential, personally i think a huge outdoors scene has more potential for an epic piece since you have a wider range of view and the sky to create a dramatic lightset, but also a the library offers very many great possebileties for great design, and since architectural rnderings are your strenght i have no doubt you will great awesome designs for both shots :) keep on going Laeticia, looking forward to your next update :)

[Zapan]

Hey Laeticia ...

As Sacha said ... both concept could be great ... Technically , the first one appears pretty huge and impressive which should give the wow look ... the second one is more interesting in an artistic way ... with design work and unusual style ...

So ... that's up to you ...

cheers ,

-Zapan

[flaeticia]

Hi everyone !
Very happy about the support ! :) Thanks u very much !

Hey Laeticia ...

As Sacha said ... both concept could be great ... Technically , the first one appears pretty huge and impressive which should give the wow look ... the second one is more interesting in an artistic way ... with design work and unusual style ...

So ... that's up to you ...

cheers ,

-Zapan

Hey u :)
I know its not very artistic, but as i already said to u, im not an artist !


Lu Jolie

well both look having quiet much potential, personally i think a huge outdoors scene has more potential for an epic piece since you have a wider range of view and the sky to create a dramatic lightset, but also a the library offers very many great possebileties for great design, and since architectural rnderings are your strenght i have no doubt you will great awesome designs for both shots keep on going Laeticia, looking forward to your next update

Yo !!

Thanks for ure remark !
The next update will come soon (i hope :D)




Like both concepts although first is a bit better. Good luck and cant wait to see modelling.


hi ! Thanks for the support !
I dont working on this two scene finally


I like the first concept...waiting for more.
(uh! gals'n'guys this thread is crazy!)

Hi :)

More will come sooooon !!



Hi flaeticia!
That's great to see you participating in this new challenge. Of course, I hope you will go as further as possible - even achieveing it (that's my purpose too ). Here we go with another spam thread! But that's the part of fun in these challenges.
Don't worry, I have to read the book too - I read it a loooong time ago, I can't even recall if I read it totally. That's a shame, but I read pretty fast, so that won't be a problem.

Bon courage!



Thanksssss la sophie :)
U know i have steph behind me, wich already said : u must finish u must finish u must finish : so ill finish :D
(i hope :D) ahahah


Organic modeling ? mmmmmhhh...
great challenge for U !

yepa !

Big challenge !
but i dont make this scene :D


see u around after i post the final sketch !

[Lemog]

I prefer the first idea too... but I think the second possible with a framing with much more depth and space certainly... woth a very different feeling, more impressive... :)

[flaeticia]

I prefer the first idea too... but I think the second possible with a framing with much more depth and space certainly... woth a very different feeling, more impressive... :)

yep !

but as i already said, its not one of this two scenes i ll do !
Thats the next sketch :)

Kisses

[Lemog]

yep !

but as i already said, its not one of this two scenes i ll do !
Thats the next sketch :)

Kisses

maybe, but I can give my advice anyway, don't ? :scream:

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160382601_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160382601_large.jpg)

All right !
There is the last sketch i think !
Thats my personnal vision of the 6th Chamber.
Probably in the final shot, the camera will have a little different angle but it will be like this way of visualisation.
For the little story, u can see patricia which comming down the stairs to take the little truck to visit the 7th chamber.
There is a little bit of rain.


Hope you like it :)

[SweD]

Hey Laeticia, I think this POV is the more interesting, and you too, 6th chamber...she seems to me the less easiest.
With all this mecanic stuff on the foreground, i wish you lot of courage. Now i'm curious to see what kind of architectural style you'll use. I've you already an idea ?
waiting the modeling :thumbsup:

[NH]

Ahaaa!... ça se précise on dirait :) waiting for your next step ! I think that the 6th chamber is not the easiest one too, good choice ! I'am courious to see how you'll do !
Best of luck :thumbsup:

[Zapan]

So you're gonna go for that one huh ? , that is gonna be pretty huge me think , but hey that's a challenge !
I will keep support you of course , so now Go ... :)

cheers ,

-Zapan

[cbernardo]

Wow! Your sketch is great!

I'll follow your work!

[]s
carlos

[Lemog]

Why not Flae... that can be a strong vision behind her... go girl :bounce:

[ChewyPixels]

Yes, I like your new concept. It is going to be a difficult one, though. Lots and lots of mechanical objects involved, not to mention the changes in weather. Good luck with this one. :)

Btw, I think you should know that story is not as important in the 3D Scene category. Judging will be based more on the actual modeling. Check the FAQ.

[ChewyPixels]

Hey, Lemog. :wavey: You're not participating in this one? Too busy, or just not interested?

P.S. Laeticia, sorry for the spam. :blush:

[Lemog]

Hey, Lemog. :wavey: You're not participating in this one? Too busy, or just not interested?
I'm very very interested... but too much busy with my reconstruction project... :shrug:(and other things) I'm a bit sad of course, it's always much pleasure for me to be here with you all :)

[TheSoracle]

So many great sketches so far :p Which one to pic Laeticia?

[celiksert]

that looks fineee.. :thumbsup:
good luck

cheers

[Elendil_le_Grand]

Nice idea i think ;)
Good luck ...

[JamesMK]

Well, the sixth chamber has infinite possibilities - carry on!

[Abaddon]

Nice concept, lots of building detail goodness.

[flaeticia]

Nice concept, lots of building detail goodness.

thanks

Well, the sixth chamber has infinite possibilities - carry on!

Yeah
Thanks for visit and for the support James :)


Nice idea i think
Good luck ...

Thanks dude !

that looks fineee..
good luck

cheers

Youre nice ! Thanks !

So many great sketches so far Which one to pic Laeticia?

Thank you:)

Yes, I like your new concept. It is going to be a difficult one, though. Lots and lots of mechanical objects involved, not to mention the changes in weather. Good luck with this one.

Btw, I think you should know that story is not as important in the 3D Scene category. Judging will be based more on the actual modeling. Check the FAQ.

Thanks jesus

Why not Flae... that can be a strong vision behind her... go girl

Yesssss like zapan said ! Truc de fouxes :D


Wow! Your sketch is great!

I'll follow your work!

[]s
carlos

Thanks Carlos !

So you're gonna go for that one huh ? , that is gonna be pretty huge me think , but hey that's a challenge !
I will keep support you of course , so now Go ...

cheers ,

-Zapan

hiha !
yes i do this one support me i need lots of support especialy about the organic modeling :D

Ahaaa!... ça se précise on dirait waiting for your next step ! I think that the 6th chamber is not the easiest one too, good choice ! I'am courious to see how you'll do !
Best of luck

Yep ! c'est parti !! gogogo
ca va pas etre simple mais bon !;)

Hey Laeticia, I think this POV is the more interesting, and you too, 6th chamber...she seems to me the less easiest.
With all this mecanic stuff on the foreground, i wish you lot of courage. Now i'm curious to see what kind of architectural style you'll use. I've you already an idea ?
waiting the modeling

Yes its not very easy but i like when its hard :D

Thanks for the support cyril :)


Soon, girls and boys, ill post the first part of the modeling !
i let you guess wich one ill post :)

Thankssssss

[SONIC-X]

Thats a solid concept that can work.

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160580721_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160580721_large.jpg)

Hi everyone !

Here is the first modeling part !
The Patricia's head.
there is lots of things to retouch, but im happy to realize this head !
What do you think about it ? :)

[Intervain]

good luck with your concept :)

About the head - she's lacking eyelids :) - but a good start

[johnnymaster]

wow, a whole head in such little amount of time, thats fine!;) I like the edge flow, it's like mine i chose for my version of patricia. I will looking forward for new stuff, good luck by the way!

edit: i see a face in the ear hehehe

[NH]

Excellent start ! :scream:
About the head i think that that you can improve the eyes too. The space between the eyes is too big... generally this pace = one eye's width ( une sorte de troisième oeil caché ;) ).
I think that you can also retouch the jaw and stop it before the ear

Keep it up :thumbsup:

[johnnymaster]

yeah i must agree with bouboul, sorry, i forgot the crits in the last post...the forehead, the part of it above the eyes are too forward-pressing, you should push it back a little, so the whole face will look more feminin.

[beelow]

Look good so far Laeticia!:thumbsup:

[TheSoracle]

Like the head so far. Just a little crit, the forehead/scalp area seems a bit lumpy. I don't know if this look was aimed for or just needs retouching, but thats all. Looks good so far, needs some hair though :p.

[mv]

if you want useful crits please post orthos :) (front and side views, with simple lighting)

are you using references?

[flaeticia]

if you want useful crits please post orthos (front and side views, with simple lighting)

are you using references?

hey m@ ! very happy to see an post from you im very honnored. About the question, yes i use some references. I think ill tweak some elements and after ill post orthos views :)

Like the head so far. Just a little crit, the forehead/scalp area seems a bit lumpy. I don't know if this look was aimed for or just needs retouching, but thats all. Looks good so far, needs some hair though .

Thanks !! ill try to retouch all these probs asap

Look good so far Laeticia!

yoo below !!
thats nice to see u here ! thanks for the support dude :)

yeah i must agree with bouboul, sorry, i forgot the crits in the last post...the forehead, the part of it above the eyes are too forward-pressing, you should push it back a little, so the whole face will look more feminin.

yess i think, at this point the head is not more feminine, but im very happy to manage this head because im not very good at organic modeling !
thanks for the support boy
i really love your personal wip on this challenge, very realistic.... not like mine :D

Excellent start !
About the head i think that that you can improve the eyes too. The space between the eyes is too big... generally this pace = one eye's width ( une sorte de troisième oeil caché ).
I think that you can also retouch the jaw and stop it before the ear

Keep it up

oh bouboul :D thanks for you comments and crits ! ill modify : if i can hihi :p

good luck with your concept

About the head - she's lacking eyelids - but a good start

yess ! ure right i modify it asap ;)

[daWinky]

Hey Flaeticia!

Wow, you've been really busy here, some nice sketches:) ! I like the idea of the 3rd one, great to see you've already started the first polys :thumbsup: .
Happy tweaking and a nice day for you!:wavey:

-sabrina

[flaeticia]

Hey Flaeticia!

Wow, you've been really busy here, some nice sketches:) ! I like the idea of the 3rd one, great to see you've already started the first polys :thumbsup: .
Happy tweaking and a nice day for you!

-sabrina

Hey sabrina :D
very happy to see you here ! :)
Thanks for your support ! ;)
See you around :wavey:

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160726941_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160726941_large.jpg)

Here is the orthographic views :) and the last render of the head.

[XenObuS]

Good luck Miss:thumbsup:

jusqu'au bout cette fois çi... :rolleyes:

[mv]

hey m@ ! very happy to see an post from you im very honnored. About the question, yes i use some references. I think ill tweak some elements and after ill post orthos views :)

haha thanks :D now wait till I make some crits.... :p



good that you posted front side and perspective. Your edge flow is quite cool, so I'd suggest, for a good workflow, that you stay at approximately this level of detail for now, tweak until you are really satisfied with your modeling (proportions etc) , and then you can carry on and model details and such. It's a common mistake to want to "mettre la charrue avant les boeufs" and make little details, start texturing shading etc without having a solid foundation.

As for the crits, I think your model doesn't need very much more to be cool, but this "little thing" is crucial and not easy to get. For face modeling , you have to be subtle and very accurate, or it will not look right. Ca pardonne pas.You can use a mirror (easiest way to get a reference, and you can turn your face in any angle..) and measure proportions.

I think most of the problems in your model so far lie in the eye and mouth areas. Also, the forehead looks quite wide and big.. the top of the skull feels very boxy.

The basic proportions of the face aren't right (eyes too far apart, not aligned with the nose wings, etc : check this little diagram http://www.carvingpatterns.com/woodarticles/images/face3.gif for the basic face proportions)

Also, your eye shape is wrong, and, especially if you want to make a beautiful woman, you need to have a nice eye shape. Easy to find refs for that : http://images.google.com/images?svnum=10&hl=en&lr=&q=woman+eye

You need to stick exactly to a good shape, or it will look wrong and your model will look strange. Don't hesitate to put your refs in your viewport and model directly on top of them to get an exact shape.

Also her mouth shape is wrong and not very sexy, and quite sharp. It's easy to find refs on that too on the net . Especially the lower lip sides are a bit "protuberant" and with a very sharp edge. Try to draw a nice mouth outline for her, it will make the face much better.

Also, be it for eye or mouth, don't forget those are 3D-dimensional features. The eyelids are sitting on an eyeball, and the mouth is on the teeth. They are not just flat features but rounded. It's very important to have this in mind.

Well that's already some long crits, hope it's not too obscure. If you want some great inspiration for human modeling, I suggest you take a peek at Peter's Syomka's modeling thread (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=14912&page=1&pp=15), it's old but golden. For instance there are pictures like this : http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=17485

Hope this will help, looking forward for the next pics!

[mv]

Un ptit overpaint qui peux donner des pistes..

[taavi]

Whoa!
One pic expresses more than a thousand words!
M@-s touch-up reminds how my drawing teacher repaired perspective errors & stuff on my drawings ;)

The concept is huge and needs a lot of work - so i wich You Flaeticia steady hand and good luck :D

[iNcurSioN]

Hey Laeticia!

Looks really good so far! I can never get SSS to work the way I want it to so congrats for that =D hehe.

I really like the concepts you've drawn up, they have a really unique feel to them and I cant wait to see where it takes you in the modelling stages.

Will be checking your updates :thumbsup: :wise:

[fellah]

salut Flaeticia!

please answer m@ asap, he is refreshing this thread every 3rd minute in the wait for you to reply and tell him what you think about his overpaint..
me, i agree with him on most points. but try to keep some style to it and dont aim for complete realism as that would be overkill when doing a big scene like this..

[baby]

Love, exciting and new
Come Aboard. We're expecting you.
Love, life's sweetest reward.
Let it flow, it floats back to you.

Love Boat soon will be making another run
The Love Boat promises something for everyone
Set a course for adventure,
Your mind on a new romance.

Love won't hurt anymore
It's an open smile on a friendly shore.
Yes LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE! It's LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!


go m@ goooo

[mv]

woaaaaw

hahahaha

[Schun]

Hi Laeticia !

As we just talk about, i think you'll be in the really really really really good way if you
follow mv's great advicing !

So I have take my sit and I just wait with all your other supporters :thumbsup:
Have a good luck et accroches toi !


jusqu'au bout cette fois çi... :rolleyes:
boooouuu le vilain taquin ! :D
(l'est vilain mais gentil ^^ ... et c'est déjà pô mal lol)

[flaeticia]

just here for few minutes !


i want to say all of my recognition about the mv touch ;)
thank you very much mv, your paint over really help me to find the errors ! ( the text too off course)
I work on it this afternoon. ive got anything, but nothing showable, not perfect :D

ill tweak some vertices and post asap, and answer to all my supporters ;)

[Jonesisme]

I see you are a popular one. Good luck and I think you are brave to do a human in your scene.

[TheFirstAngel]

nice start on the model Laeticia! m@ has already made a great fixing sheet and very constructive sugestions, so i am very eager to see how your next update with the fixed volumes looks like :) it is possible i will join the 3d fun later so you can smile then when i get lost between splines and verticles then ^^ meilleur salutations et bonne chance! hehe, keep up the great work and thanks again for your very encouragign post over in my thread :)

[DaVee]

great start, wish you to have fun in this new challenge.

the best to you.

David.

[TheSoracle]

Agreeing with all above. Not that yours wasnt good, it was great. But M@ madeit even greater than great. EIther way, cant wait to see an update, looks good so far, just a bit bland and too smooth right now. Needs a bit better texture, thats all.

[holycause]

je vois que tu t'es inscrite comme à chaque fois :thumbsup:

Bonne chance à toi m'selle

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160994083_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160994083_large.jpg)

Hi ! Here is the ortho views of the Patricia's Head!
Thats not eccellent but its better than before :)

c&c please :p

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160994179_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1160994179_large.jpg)

here is the Patrica's Head :)

[SweD]

Hey Laeticia, i see that mathias advices helped you ! The shape look better that's sure. I think ears need more work and you can reduce and make them little rounder . Except that point, you're really on the good way girl ! :thumbsup:

[SONIC-X]

Looking cool Laeticia!

[baby]

I can't wait to see our beloved m@ give his precious comments...

please please....

[iNcurSioN]

That's definately improved on the shape of the head alot! Very nice update Laeticia :thumbsup: and yea I'm curious to see what m@ has to say too ^_^

[fellah]

goo http://www.andersehrenborg.com/TEMP/mathiasSmiley.gif goo http://www.andersehrenborg.com/TEMP/mathiasSmiley.gif goo http://www.andersehrenborg.com/TEMP/mathiasSmiley.gif


:love:

[mv]

ah yes, that's already way better :)
I don't have time to make crits right now, I'll do that this evening if I find some time, but you're on the good way!




elton and john : :rolleyes:

[baby]

no time for FLaeticia

shame on you loverboy !


Hollywood has already heard about their story... Oo

M@ & Flaeticia : the musical
http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/M@%20&%20Flaeticia%20the%20musical.mp3

[Rebeccak]

Wow, that is a great song, and just perfect for describing the romance of the century! *cries with the emotion of it all* :D

blame matt for pointing this thread out to me...wait, I'm swooning...

[iNcurSioN]

Lol :P good old Moulin Rouge

[mv]

ca part en live :argh: :D

[fellah]

ca part en live

"ca part en love", u mean?

[flaeticia]

no he wants to say that becomes nimportnawak :scream::wise:

[mv]

I don't think he will understand that either :/

[flaeticia]

I don't think he will understand that either :/

ure right :D
:p

the good translate is this:shrug: ?

that becomes anything

[mv]

"it's becoming crazy" ... mais c'est pas vraiment ca non plus :/

[baby]

maybe you could adopt him and teach him french...

your little swedish kido...


:D

[mv]

true, would make a nice pet,
hairy like a piglet...

[mv]

So here are some crits. A few directions that might help you... so far you've been shaping it in the good way, I don't think you need much took make it nice.

A general consideration first.

Sharpness : a lot of parts of your model come as sharp and hard edged. Organic modeling is all about flowing muscles, skin, that give a lively look... Especially when modeling women, you need to think about softness and nice curves, or it will look unnatural.
Technically, this kind of problem comes from bad edgeloops, or vertices too close to each other and uncontrolled.

A good way to check if your surfaces are smooth and things are not too sharp in places, is to put a shader with a lot of glossiness and specularity and turn around your model a lot when modeling, and tweak vertices until all your surfaces are smooth.

So the crits now are related to the points:
http://mv.cgcommunity.com/echange/flaecrit.jpg

1. Shape of the eye. It's really better since the last pic :) Do you model over an eyeball? if you don't ,you should model an eyeball first , put the eyes and then model your eyelids on it, it's really handy. My main crit now would be that the eyelids are too thin, almost like paper, we don't feel the skin it that, makes it unnatural.
Also, there's missing a visible tearduct (the little red part that should be were my first arrow is pointing), unless she is asian, but even so, your skin goes the wrong way (your lower eyelid skin goes over the upper eyelid skin, it should be the other way, as you can see here if you lok her eye closely (http://k43.pbase.com/o4/94/17294/1/52929135.Asiangirlweb.jpg))

2. the wing of the nose (the 2 parts around the nostrils) are not clearly defined, that looks very strange. (see 8)

3.The mouth. Still looks very simple. You should definitely work more on the overall shape of the lips, and keep in mind that the mouth is a very 3 dimensional volume. Your mouth edges are also very sharp and unnatural. Here are some shots of a mouth model than can give you some ideas : (it's not perfect but I hope it helps)
http://mv.cgcommunity.com/echange/flaecritmouth.jpg

4. The jawline : I feel like it is very very sharp and a bit jagged, try to round it a bit and give a nicer curve

5. the shape of the nose looks quite simple, there may be some ideas on the above pic. Noses can be very different, have different shapes and a lot of prsonality of a character is in the nose... So I suggest you do some research or find a reference of a nose you'd like to be on your character.

6. feels like the eyes are too much inside the orbits

7. Your ear shape is a good start , but looks very sharp and a lot of curves are more like polygons than real curves. Accurately use refs on this. Also, it looks a bit too big.

8. wing of the nose, on the side view, we really see that you didn't give much thought to that yet :)

9. your jaw line is wrong, it shouldn't go beyond the ear (you don't have your ear ON your cheek, but just after it )


----
hope that helps you (and others that visit the thread) ! looking forward for more updates, but don't stay too much on the character either , there's a lot of work to do on your piece seemingly; keep it up!

[TheSoracle]

The new head looks good. Hard to tell about the really fine details, but looks excellent for now. The more minor details will appear after texturing. I like the overall look, about to start face modelling on my scene now, will refer back to yours for some reference :p

And of course to mv's critique.

[heraldroseparade]

great modeling on the head ;)

[fellah]

a picture can say more than a thousand words....
http://www.andersehrenborg.com/TEMP/matDrawing.jpg

[mv]

loooool

there's a flaw though in your pic, showing that you added the text ;) (bastard you edited the pic now :p )

I laughed hard though :D

[Lemog]

No much time for me actually to walk much on these many thread but this one is of course very interesting...

...much good things :
- progress for Laeticia in anatomy,
- good councils by Matthias about organic modeling
- and of course, good drawings by Anders about love story :scream:

A real good scenario for a film... just need the action now... :D hahahahaha

[johnnymaster]

that's a very romantic story! Good luck mv! hahahahaaa

[NH]

Hahaha ! c'est vraiment " parti en live ! " :D
MV, good luck mec ! :D

[ChewyPixels]

Getting a bit better with each new tweak. Just follow m@'s suggestions and it will come together just fine.

Wait a minute, what going on here? Some kind of soap-opera/love epic story? :D

[flaeticia]

Getting a bit better with each new tweak. Just follow m@'s suggestions and it will come together just fine.

Wait a minute, what going on here? Some kind of soap-opera/love epic story?


Thanks for support ! :)
ill follow the m@ suggestions !
About the love epic story, ahahah ROFL ...:bounce:


Hahaha ! c'est vraiment " parti en live ! "
MV, good luck mec !
c clair ça part en live total :D

that's a very romantic story! Good luck mv! hahahahaaa

ahahahahah
crazy boys :p

No much time for me actually to walk much on these many thread but this one is of course very interesting...

...much good things :
- progress for Laeticia in anatomy,
- good councils by Matthias about organic modeling
- and of course, good drawings by Anders about love story

A real good scenario for a film... just need the action now... hahahahaha


ohohoh !
You
im very happy to see kind words from you
thanks a lot lolo :) so nice !

a picture can say more than a thousand words....

ahahaha
very good skills about msn drawin' :p

great modeling on the head
hey you !
its not perfect but im happy with these result ! so thats a good way .

The new head looks good. Hard to tell about the really fine details, but looks excellent for now. The more minor details will appear after texturing. I like the overall look, about to start face modelling on my scene now, will refer back to yours for some reference

And of course to mv's critique.

thanks boy

So here are some crits. A few directions that might help you... so far you've been shaping it in the good way, I don't think you need much took make it nice.

A general consideration first.

Sharpness : a lot of parts of your model come as sharp and hard edged. Organic modeling is all about flowing muscles, skin, that give a lively look... Especially when modeling women, you need to think about softness and nice curves, or it will look unnatural.
Technically, this kind of problem comes from bad edgeloops, or vertices too close to each other and uncontrolled.

A good way to check if your surfaces are smooth and things are not too sharp in places, is to put a shader with a lot of glossiness and specularity and turn around your model a lot when modeling, and tweak vertices until all your surfaces are smooth.

So the crits now are related to the points:
http://mv.cgcommunity.com/echange/flaecrit.jpg

1. Shape of the eye. It's really better since the last pic Do you model over an eyeball? if you don't ,you should model an eyeball first , put the eyes and then model your eyelids on it, it's really handy. My main crit now would be that the eyelids are too thin, almost like paper, we don't feel the skin it that, makes it unnatural.
Also, there's missing a visible tearduct (the little red part that should be were my first arrow is pointing), unless she is asian, but even so, your skin goes the wrong way (your lower eyelid skin goes over the upper eyelid skin, it should be the other way, as you can see here if you lok her eye closely (http://k43.pbase.com/o4/94/17294/1/52929135.Asiangirlweb.jpg))

2. the wing of the nose (the 2 parts around the nostrils) are not clearly defined, that looks very strange. (see 8)

3.The mouth. Still looks very simple. You should definitely work more on the overall shape of the lips, and keep in mind that the mouth is a very 3 dimensional volume. Your mouth edges are also very sharp and unnatural. Here are some shots of a mouth model than can give you some ideas : (it's not perfect but I hope it helps)
http://mv.cgcommunity.com/echange/flaecritmouth.jpg

4. The jawline : I feel like it is very very sharp and a bit jagged, try to round it a bit and give a nicer curve

5. the shape of the nose looks quite simple, there may be some ideas on the above pic. Noses can be very different, have different shapes and a lot of prsonality of a character is in the nose... So I suggest you do some research or find a reference of a nose you'd like to be on your character.

6. feels like the eyes are too much inside the orbits

7. Your ear shape is a good start , but looks very sharp and a lot of curves are more like polygons than real curves. Accurately use refs on this. Also, it looks a bit too big.

8. wing of the nose, on the side view, we really see that you didn't give much thought to that yet

9. your jaw line is wrong, it shouldn't go beyond the ear (you don't have your ear ON your cheek, but just after it )


----
hope that helps you (and others that visit the thread) ! looking forward for more updates, but don't stay too much on the character either , there's a lot of work to do on your piece seemingly; keep it up!

wooa c'est trop le style:D
Thanks a lot matthias :) very cool and very useful !
About the mouth, thats a very hard part of the anatomy for me, because i dont understand the placement of the lips :(
i open the mouth to see how its placed, but when i close its appears crazy ... upper lips comes to be posed of above the bottom lips ... in modeling (for me its a nightmarre, even on zbrush :( )

[baby]

QUOTE
[About the mouth, thats a very hard part of the anatomy for me, because i dont understand the placement of the lips :(
i open the mouth to see how its placed, but when i close its appears crazy ... upper lips comes to be posed of above the bottom lips ... in modeling (for me its a nightmarre, even on zbrush :( ) ]

=thats a very hard part of the anatomy for me
=i open the mouth to see how its placed

too erotic for me.... beware...


and then strange things happens...
http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/crazy.jpg

[mv]

flaeticia : cool, hope it will help you. Looking forward for your next update

ps : looks like someone is overexcited here...

[baby]

tssss you're bad boy

http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/war%20of%20the%20msn.jpg

[gpepper]

Hola, les gars, c'est presque de la divulgation de vie privée !
Montrer ses conversations avec Laetiss, ça ne se fait pas !
:)

[mv]

baby dit :

a mon avis
baby dit :

ca va la saouler



bravo :applause:

[flaeticia]

Hola, les gars, c'est presque de la divulgation de vie privée !
Montrer ses conversations avec Laetiss, ça ne se fait pas !

hé lol j'ai jamais causé avec eux :D

tssss you're bad boy

http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeti...20the%20msn.jpg (http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/war%20of%20the%20msn.jpg)

oh my god :o

flaeticia : cool, hope it will help you. Looking forward for your next update

ps : looks like someone is overexcited here...

yo mat ;) !
it was very helpful !
ill post an update asap :)
kisses (ahahahahahah :p :D)

QUOTE
[About the mouth, thats a very hard part of the anatomy for me, because i dont understand the placement of the lips :(
i open the mouth to see how its placed, but when i close its appears crazy ... upper lips comes to be posed of above the bottom lips ... in modeling (for me its a nightmarre, even on zbrush :( ) ]

=thats a very hard part of the anatomy for me
=i open the mouth to see how its placed

too erotic for me.... beware...


and then strange things happens...
http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/crazy.jpg

oh charles :D
uve got shameful desires? :D ahahahahah

psst -> c'est une vraie conv ou c pour le délire? :o



[/url][url="http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/war%20of%20the%20msn.jpg"] (http://babystudio.free.fr/m@&Flaeticia/crazy.jpg)

[mv]

kisses (ahahahahahah :p :D)


:blush::D

psst -> c'est une vraie conv ou c pour le délire? :o

un peu des deux :eek: crazy guys!

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1161247979_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1161247979_large.jpg)

here is the update about the Head.
I think its ok :p
now my problem is about the eyes... lots of difficulty to realize realistic version !
work on it now :)

see you around

[mv]

ah yes, this is getting really better! :applause:
especially about the mouth, no more bad pinching on the corners, very cool! and the overall smoothness is great too :)
Keep it up!

[baby]

une vraie conv...

5 Faleticias qui parlent entre elle....du grand n'importe quoi....

Hello I'm FLaeticia and I like magenta.....

hahahaa



mais bon allez stop...

[flaeticia]

une vraie conv...

5 Faleticias qui parlent entre elle....du grand n'importe quoi....

Hello I'm FLaeticia and I like magenta.....

hahahaa



mais bon allez stop...

oué genre du grand n'importe quoi c'est clair :D

[beelow]

head model is looking very good! work the ears a bit and your good to go! :thumbsup:

[Lemog]

Hello I'm FLaeticia and I like magenta.....

hahaha... même si on arrive pas forcément à tout suivre... celle-là est trop bonne :thumbsup:

Too much funny :scream:

...too much of Flaeticia make us pink :bounce:

[flaeticia]

hahaha... même si on arrive pas forcément à tout suivre... celle-là est trop bonne :thumbsup:

Too much funny :scream:

...too much of Flaeticia make us pink :bounce:

en plus j'aime pas le majenta :D non mais :p

[fellah]

hey, wtf.. m@ said you took this conversation over to msn.. private..???

pff.... now what shall i do....?? well, i am glad Charles and me could bring a couple together. please name your son Elton John Verhasselt..
:love:

[baby]

First MSN...
then....
I don't want to know...


we should work together Fellah one day :) and open an agency for people to meet...

[agou]

wo-oow Laetiss... you improved a lot since the last time... but you had good advices from master mv, that's great.
about msn talks> haha, that's funny, I don't have that great conversations on msn :D...

[Zapan]

I just don't get it , what you guys say to be allowed to talk to her ? I keep bugging her but she keep ignoring me .... :D ...

@ baby : ROFL :scream:

@ La russe : grr I'm jealous ! :D

cheers ,

-Zapan

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1161592893_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1161592893_large.jpg)

Hi everyone ! today ill show you the first first part of the body. Thats really the first one for me !
Its not perfect but im quite happy because it seems anything people know :)
c&c welcome of course :P

[ChewyPixels]

Good job for your first body. :thumbsup:

A couple of crits. As you have now, the waist appears too long. Also, the legs seem a bit short. Here is a link that should help you with human proportions:

http://library.thinkquest.org/C0118063/studio/proportion.htm

[daWinky]

Hey Laeticia!

That's your first body:eek: !? I'm changing my color now, getting envy:scream: ...that's just a great start and I'm glad that I never showed my very first attempt...
And with the face I agree with Sophie, a lot of improvement with the modeling:thumbsup: ...and I'll have another look at all the helpfull comments you've got here when I start my Patricia!
Keep on the great work, this looks really promising!

Have a nice day!:)

-sabrina

[claudiojordao]

Hello flaeticia, what a great job you've been doing here... and that first body looks very very good. Keep going.

[Lemog]

Great progress with your body Flae'...

just need to tweak some details a little, but the base is so good...
- hanches un peu basses,
- torse un peu trop long,
- fesses trop pointues et top hautes,
- les jambes trop courtes...

and just my thoughts... but you certainly don't planed to show her in your scenery totally naked not ? then, maybe it's not usefull to realize her like that... that will be make much more work for you after to give her some clothes...
...in other hand, that give you new skills about anat modeling, and of course, it's always good to take.

I keep here with open mouth while waiting the next step of your body modeling :thumbsup:

[agou]

Nothing to add to Lemog's advices... just find some photographic refs that will help. However, that's an amazing improvement, can't believe it's your first body modeling, because the mesh seems to be clear.

See you later!

[fellah]

m@ didnt have time today, so he asked me to do a paintover and forward his love wishes :)

http://www.andersehrenborg.com/TEMP/11703_1161592893_large2.jpg

basically
*try to nail down the proportions before going in to details such as collarbones, nipples, kneecaps etc.. dont hesitate to use orthographic reference images (3d.sk have alot)
*keep the curves smooth.
*avoid opposite arcs(as explained in the topright corner of the paintover)
*say hello to m@ from me!

[baby]

I dont believe this, you're suppose to deliver a model and it's urgent and...


ok ok it's FLaticia, I understand... but she's M@ love, and I'm yours.... :sad:

[Jonesisme]

Don't let them change your design too much. When the book describes Patricia it clearly states she has an impractical body. I think it looks good.

[fellah]

Jonesisme,
your reply sound stupid, and and infact it made me laugh :sad:

having an "impractical" body sure does not mean being anatomically incorrect.
maybe she is a bit chubby. maybe her legs are long and uncontrollable.. maybe she is just unathletic etc..

no offense flaeticia, your body is good for a first body. but that fact aside it needs some work, just as everyones first body have needed tweaking. not saying it needs to be exactly as the paintover but there are some pointers there that should not be neglected to make a believable character..

i will stick to love and my kompis :love:

[baby]

woooo M@

I think the swedish lover tries to still your girl, be carefull


"no offense flaeticia, your body is good "

[Schun]

loly (pops) & hotty topics we have got here :scream:
Yes, perhaps we have the new french tendancy here :
After THE kiss, the on-line chatting hu hu hu

Some already scaling problem detected (by Lemog for exemple) ; perhaps the pelvis area
which is a few cubical for me ... i like a lot the leg : they mean it's a sportive
girl (perhaps the muscle are a little too much :rolleyes:)


so,
vivement la suite !

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1161773496_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1161773496_large.jpg)

Hi everyone !
Im a little bit busy theses days so thats why i don't answer to you : please excuse me ! ill do it asap !
For the moment i show you a screenshot about the boots of Patricia. I really appreciate this model of boots : really funky, and so beautiful !
I just post a screenshot because the boots arent allready unwraped !
Im gonna details this boots with Zbrush i think !
So now just a screenshot to see how it is !
Hope you like it ! See you around :)

[flaeticia]

So now i answer ! (no update for the moment).

loly (pops) & hotty topics we have got here
Yes, perhaps we have the new french tendancy here :
After THE kiss, the on-line chatting hu hu hu

Some already scaling problem detected (by Lemog for exemple) ; perhaps the pelvis area
which is a few cubical for me ... i like a lot the leg : they mean it's a sportive
girl (perhaps the muscle are a little too much


so,
vivement la suite !

Yep ! lots of different problems, ill try to erase asap :)

thanks for the support boy ;)

woooo M@

I think the swedish lover tries to still your girl, be carefull


"no offense flaeticia, your body is good "

ahah trop le style charly :p


no offense flaeticia, your body is good for a first body. but that fact aside it needs some work, just as everyones first body have needed tweaking. not saying it needs to be exactly as the paintover but there are some pointers there that should not be neglected to make a believable character..


fortunately you said that, else, you know that Ill have struck you :D
ahahah
About the over paint
thats allright boy :)

very very helpfull !
just want to thank u so much

i work on these problems todays :)

[flaeticia]

Good job for your first body.

A couple of crits. As you have now, the waist appears too long. Also, the legs seem a bit short. Here is a link that should help you with human proportions:

http://library.thinkquest.org/C0118.../proportion.htm (http://library.thinkquest.org/C0118063/studio/proportion.htm)

thanks a lot for the links

thank u for the c&c :)

Hey Laeticia!

That's your first body !? I'm changing my color now, getting envy ...that's just a great start and I'm glad that I never showed my very first attempt...
And with the face I agree with Sophie, a lot of improvement with the modeling ...and I'll have another look at all the helpfull comments you've got here when I start my Patricia!
Keep on the great work, this looks really promising!

Have a nice day!

-sabrina

Hey u
hehehe !
yep first body !
The really first one is the tutorial from michel roger about joan of arc !
but the body was too boxy !!
now its better, but there is lots of mistakes but its ok
Thanks you for these kind words :)
see you around !

Hello flaeticia, what a great job you've been doing here... and that first body looks very very good. Keep going.
thanksssssssss !!

Great progress with your body Flae'...

just need to tweak some details a little, but the base is so good...
- hanches un peu basses,
- torse un peu trop long,
- fesses trop pointues et top hautes,
- les jambes trop courtes...

and just my thoughts... but you certainly don't planed to show her in your scenery totally naked not ? then, maybe it's not usefull to realize her like that... that will be make much more work for you after to give her some clothes...
...in other hand, that give you new skills about anat modeling, and of course, it's always good to take.

I keep here with open mouth while waiting the next step of your body modeling

Yepa my friend
(yepa ? on s'improvise un pas de danse :D )

im totally agree with all of your comments
about the clothes, sure she have clothes she's not an porno actress ahahah (gilles amerai bien pourtant :p)
but i really try to do something correctly about the organic ! so i work on it

thanks for the support lolo :)
kisses

agou Nothing to add to Lemog's advices... just find some photographic refs that will help. However, that's an amazing improvement, can't believe it's your first body modeling, because the mesh seems to be clear.

See you later!

yoyoyo la sophie
How are u my friend ?
Hehe thanks for your comments ! as i allready said before, i made the tutorial of michel roger few months ago, but nothing more really !
Its not an exceptionnal tricks ! lol

kisses !!


I just don't get it , what you guys say to be allowed to talk to her ? I keep bugging her but she keep ignoring me .... ...

@ baby : ROFL

@ La russe : grr I'm jealous !

cheers ,

-Zapan

ahahah jealous :D
tu toqpe + de moi tte facon
avec toutes tes élèves ... .ahahahaha ta cho dans la culotte : hihi

have fun to ure new work baby :D

[Lemog]

These boots are totally you of course... maybe a ZB detailing will be too much for it, not ? or maybe you planed that these boot will see very closer ? if not... good texturing must be sufficient.

Best wishes for the continuation... kisses :love:

[agou]

yeeeeaaah! Funky boots! ch'est trop géniaaaaaal! Continue dans cette voie là, je te suis à 100%.
yeah I also learned human body modeling thanks to Mr. Roger two years ago. That's not a secret, his tutorial is the first one for many modeling students. Maybe one day, our dear Stef will take his place. :D
tchou!

[TheFirstAngel]

lu ma chère!

lol i am so slow fellah and the others already done that i am such an éscargot :blush:
first, congrats on the hot thread :) and here's a little overpaint, hope it helps, thou, the others all were faster - as usal ^^
very nice boots by the way i bet they make very sexy legs ^^
keep up the great work :) a+ :beer::buttrock:

http://www.angel3d.ch/content/challenge/xtra/flaeticia_ovp.jpg

[mehmi]

well done =3:bounce: i havent done much with 3d yet, just mucked around with it, but that looks good for a first model. i agree with fellah a bit, i know what impractical body is like ;) lol. good work though =3 :applause:

[johnnymaster]

hey, very nice work on the body, nice shape of the breasts:D But Patricia has trained her legs too much, a bit too muscular, but all together nice and fast work.

ps: Hey you guys, why do you only give help to beautiful women? Give help to ME and the other needy guys! :bounce::twisted:

[daWinky]

Hey Laeticia,

ah, those boots...they'll be a good eyecatcher:thumbsup: ! ... maybe a ZB detailing will be too much for it, not ? or maybe you planed that these boot will see very closer ? if not... good texturing must be sufficient. Lol, of course Lolo don't know what he's talking about, women's shoes can never get enough attention:D ...I'm curious to see Patricia wearing your creation!

ps: Hey you guys, why do you only give help to beautiful women? Give help to ME and the other needy guys! He he, perhaps you've just to change your avatar:p (http://forums.cgsociety.org/misc.php?do=getsmilies&wysiwyg=1&forumid=0#)...to something less frightening...

-sabrina

[Lemog]

Lol, of course Lolo don't know what he's talking about, women's shoes can never get enough attention:D .
Are you sure ? :scream: (you forget I have a wife :banghead: hahahahaha)

[daWinky]

Are you sure ? :scream: (you forget I have a wife :banghead: hahahahaha)

He he..you forget I have a husband: I am sure!:D

-sabrina

[johnnymaster]

He he, perhaps you've just to change your avatar:p (http://forums.cgsociety.org/misc.php?do=getsmilies&wysiwyg=1&forumid=0#)...to something less frightening...


but that's me, actually......i'm the hulk, okay, not at this moment, but when i'm angry:bounce: enough spamming, sorry:twisted:

[flaeticia]

hi everyone !
sorry to dont be very active these days, but i have personnal difficulties and thats why im not really "in" !
I hope ill post the body of Patricia asap :) today if i can !
see u around :)

and thanks for the support

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1162318446_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1162318446_large.jpg)

Yoyoyo !
Hey everybody :)

very happy to have the possibility to post anything here !

ok so here is the body of patricia !
Ill try to follow the advices of the boys which post before !
i hope its better now !
its not perfect i know but im happy whith that !

now lots of work about the hands :( so harrrd :)

c&c welcome of course :)

see you around !!

[][ndy]

Hey Laeticia,

nice work there, you're getting better from challenge to challenge!

Maybe you could thicken out the arms and legs a bit more, at the moment they look out of proportion.

Keep up the good work!

[DaVee]

Well, i'm not so skilled in modeling, but i think you should take care of the hips they look too narrow for me. Looks like a young girl.
Otherwise the upper part is ... nice.
:)
David.

[TheSoracle]

Wow, looking awesome flaeticia. Its been forever since I was last here. (You were still modelling the head) Anyway, the body looks amazing as always. Keep up the great work :thumbsup:

Can't wait to see the full thing put together and textured (with clothes of course) :p

- Steven

[flaeticia]

TheSoracle
>-> thanksssss steven ;)

DaVee
>-> thanks for ure critics ! ill see what i can do for it :)

][ndy
>-> Yooooo indy :)
Very happy to see you here !!
Thanks for ure visit and ure comments !

ill start asap the cloth i think !! very hard :)

[Zapan]

Lot of great progress here !

Keep updating ... can't wait for the D&G on her :D

cheers ,

-Zapan

[gpepper]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1162318446_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1162318446_large.jpg)

C'est mieux.
j'espère juste que tu ne t'es pas prise en photo comme référence, sinon, un mythe s'écroule... :D

Je crois juste que les hanches ne remontent pas assez haut, pas assez large par rapport au petit bidon qu'elle a. En même temps elle est réaliste, c'est juste pas un canon quoi... ;)

[TheFirstAngel]

oui, beaucoup de progres, ca comence a marcher bien, hien :) hehe, une petite peux plus de definion peutêtre mais ca regarde mieux! beaucoup de plaisire et a + , jolie ^^

[Nomad]

Great modeling work :thumbsup: I wish I could model characters like you one day :shrug:

I`m looking forward for your progress :bounce:

[][ndy]

][ndy
>-> Yooooo indy :)
Very happy to see you here !!
Thanks for ure visit and ure comments !


Thanks for the warm welcome!
Hope to see some updates soon!

[flaeticia]

http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1163518501_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/15/11703/11703_1163518501_large.jpg)

i everyone !
im a little bit less present these days, because im very very busy :)
Just time to start with the clothes !
Hope you like it !

[TheFirstAngel]

ah, merci jolie, pour tes mots à ma ilhustration :) tue es ne train de faire quelcechose de mangnifique et très chique, il ne te faut plus de gaultier ou gucci si flaeticia commence la collecion de *space" ^^ jolie *corsette"-style top, je ne peux pas entender à voir le finir ^^

hahaha my french is so terrible but i keep trying :p allez allez allez! :scream::beer::wip:

[Gunilla]

I agree with Angel here - very funky top :thumbsup:
Have you got anywhere with the hands? I agree hands is a pain. Go on now, you're doing great!

[ChewyPixels]

Hey. It's about time you post something new. :)

Great to see that Patricia is coming along. I really like the modeling on the clothes.

Quick suggestion. Try not to model too much folds and wrinkles until after you pose her. Makes it a lot easier in the end.

Keep it up! :wip:

[Zapan]

Heya la russe !

Stopping by to enjoy your progress ... looks like a really cool and fancy top ...
Although , as Gunie , I'm a bit worried about the missing hands ... :p ... just teasing ... :D

Hope to see more soon .... that's right .... more soon :D

cheers , béco béco

-Zapan

[Nomad]

Wow! Great modeling work! Tout simplement magnifique!
The body and the clothes looks already fantastic. Can`t wait to see the finished character... Wish I can model like that one day :shrug:

Keep this quality! :bounce:

[Bergquist]

This was a really hard thread to catch up on! I'm not very good at french, so about half way through the thread i gave up on translating it all... seems to be mostly about random stuff anyway... loverboy can't seem to get enough of you :rolleyes: :D

Alright, now on to business! I really like your last concept the most! and Patricia is going to be a great part of the scene! I'm diggin those clothes so far! :buttrock:

I enjoyed following your updates to the head, and all the changes you made from cretiques! Your end result came a long way and looks very nice! He might be a little love struck, but whatever the reason M@ gave you some great advise!

Its gonna be awesome to see the environment! Watchin close! :thumbsup:

-I just started on this competition a couple days ago, so after I get something posted maybe you'll stop by and drop some spam! :D Peace Peace!

[beelow]

Hey Laeticia! Had to drop by and see what you were up too and it looks like your almost finished with the character model. You may want to entend the legs a bit. They look a little short. Waiting to see more work from ya!:thumbsup:

[Intervain]

her breasts are gianormous :eek: she must have a lot of back problems, the poor thing - space travel is completely out ;)

[TheSoracle]

Agreed. ^^

Her breasts are massive. Not that there is a problem XD.

Awesome modelling job Laeticia!!!

- Steven

[flaeticia]

Hey boys and girls !
sorry for the little moment of break
im very busy so, it will be difficult for me to find times for modeling !
the next week i think it will be more easy to do this :p
so ill correct the top with her beast (not big, just without bra ...), and make her pants, a jean ... diesel one :p

thank you for the support ;)

[Intervain]

funny enough it's the top that' s making them look huge - they are quite normal in the nude model...

[johnnymaster]

man, this is the newest trend, tops with silicon bolster, i wear them too:twisted:

[flaeticia]

man, this is the newest trend, tops with silicon bolster, i wear them too:twisted:


ahahahahah :p
Excellent :thumbsup::bounce::applause::applause:

[SweD]

the next week i think it will be more easy to do this
great to read that ! hope you can follow your idea and finish your character !
Can't wait !:bounce:

[ChewyPixels]

Still waiting for the next update. :p Go, go, go! :)

[HFix]

modeling looking good!! Good Luck with your final rendering! :)

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