Star wars Kotor "Exile

[Defcombeta]

ok after some points mentioned by others , i can see there is a plastic finish to the image. does anyone have any points etc to help break this cycle im stuck in right now

thanks

j mac

[pap87]

I think the main problem here is the lighting. It's as though the girl doesn't fit into the surroundings properly. It looks like a fairly clear sky, so you'd expect to see a much more distinct light source creating hard shadows. There isn't very much light/dark contrast right now.

Otherwise the rest is really nice, the colours, the anatomy and the background looks nice too. :thumbsup:

[Defcombeta]

thanks for taking the time to comment pap87

i did some more on the image tonight, added in some more detail and fixed some things. i still have more to do

again thanks for taking the time to offer some sound advice


http://homepage.eircom.net/~defcombeta13/exile%20rework1.jpg

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