a warrior depart WIP, crits?

[Array]

Hey,

Looks cool! I sort of liked the wider perspective you had going on before though. I didnt realize that he had four arms either.

Have you decided on a color scheme yet?

[Clorinth]

It's a good start, but i think you could get a stronger pose out of him. For now it seems like he isn't balance and might be falling back. His legs seem a bit thin too. His upper half seems good.

[xChrisGx]

thanks guys, i appreciate the comments, they are helpful. here is another version. i adjusted the standing guy's posture a bit and added a basic color scheme. i am going for a somewhat retro look. good? bad? i'll keep you guys updated as i continue.

-chris
http://homepages.nyu.edu/~cwg212/a warrior departs 2

[Chanzilla]

Looks good. Nice perspective and good line widths.

[xChrisGx]

heres where the pics at so far. just updating. any suggestions? mainly im wondering if the shading n such is ok from one char to the next. also, although im not there yet, im trying to decide what to do exactly for the background.

-chris

http://homepages.nyu.edu/~cwg212/a warrior departs 3

[Array]

Coool! I like the shading on the armor. It looks like Gnomon is allready paying off.

Regarding the background, how about a crazy Amano-ish castle in the distance to the right?

Like this:

http://www.altvampyres.net/vhd/abd130b.jpg

Zing!

[xChrisGx]

another update. not sure if the ground of back is too simple. i am sorta trying to get a more empty feel, and not trying to add that castle, hehe. its nice though, i am going to keep it in mind for other pieces. if the simple ground works, great, if not, what shall i do to it? thanks again.

-chris

http://homepages.nyu.edu/~cwg212/a warrior departs 4

[xChrisGx]

heres the pic again with just the characters. just dont know about that background, i may keep it this way.

-chris

http://homepages.nyu.edu/~cwg212/a warrior departs 5

[eishiya]

I wish I had seen this thread earlier. I think the head is too large, and all of the arms seem to be different legths. The one that's bent in front of his face is the longest, I think it should be a tad smaller. I think the torso might be too large, I'm not sure, right now the large head is really offsetting things. The feet of the one on the ground don't seem to be interacting, the bottom foot is being "cut into" by the upper foot instead of supporting and raising it.

The shading is very dull and light right now, it should be more intense, especially if you're going for some sort of mood.

[xChrisGx]

thanks for the tips. here is the standing guy reproportioned a bit.

-chris

http://homepages.nyu.edu/~cwg212/a warrior departs 7

[Salubri3i]

just looking around. this is very nice. :thumbsup:

[xChrisGx]

thanks! here is another version where i made another small change, forgot about this one. shrunk the hand. i think the proportions are finally acceptable now.

-chris

http://homepages.nyu.edu/~cwg212/a warrior departs 8

[Array]

Sure, he can spear some dude with pink hair to death....but how well would he stand up to the might of Baba?

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