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cycron
02-02-2003, 12:33 AM
Hello everybody :) - My name is Rasmus

This is my first try at a human head..

I need some C&C before continuing with the ears..thanks :)

I use 3dsmax 5, Polymodelling.. - Rendered with fRender

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip1.jpg

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip2.jpg

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip3.jpg

If anyone wants to see the wireframe, just ask and I'll post em'
killahsin
02-02-2003, 01:19 AM
hook up a front view first so we can see better and also perhaps a wireframe. Hard to crit because of the darkness of the mesh too
cycron
02-02-2003, 01:36 AM
Oh..sorry

Hope this helps :)

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip1_1.jpg

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip2_2.jpg

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip3_3.jpg

http://cycron.cination.dk/gordon_wip3_4.jpg

And some wireframes..

http://cycron.cination.dk/wire1.jpg

http://cycron.cination.dk/wire2.jpg

:)
oracrest
02-02-2003, 07:50 PM
make the jaw thinner from the front, and push the lower half of the face in more. As of right now, he looks a little like the missing link......


maybe add some body to the lips near the center. The bottom lip is usually a little thicker than the top.
ThirdEye
02-02-2003, 08:20 PM
It would be better if you post the step-0 wireframes, not the smoothed ;)
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