Just a render...

[diazgl]

really nice, and nicely modeller, but there are some mistakes
-the eyebrows look weird
-her ears also look a bit weird
-and her shoulders are a bit wrong. I mean, she looks like a more grown-up but her shoulders imply a small girl

[telecaustic]

She looks kinda creepy for some reason.

[Sama3d]

yes, im workin that out.:eek:

[Willa]

lOOKin good , id say the weird factor is the lighting , and maybe she needs some denser' hair?

other than that , if u still think she looks creepy , maybe you should check your sexuality w00t! jk :)

lookin good man.

[vizion]

good modeling, but her hair needs a bit of work.

[echo]

It's all about lights and hair...fix these 2 problems and this will be awesome ;)

[Blackarts]

yup. someone went nuts with the flow-bee haircut system on this chick. The lighting is super flat as well, and the eyes look a little glazed over and lifeless.

[diazgl]

about the lights, why not start with a simple lighting? Go for a spotlight with soft shadows, NO ambient light, and add another light, with intensity about 15-25 (whatever you see fit) that point exactly the same as your camera (parented to the camera) that casts no shadows.

-1 Spotlight with soft shadows
-2 Directional light of intensity 20, casting no shadows, parented to the camera.
-3 No ambient light

give that a try. I use this configuration for all of my works, and proceed from there.

[Grayson]

I wrote a little tutorial on the 3 point lighting system and some shadow maps basics. Check it out, it might help you out a bit.
Lighting Workshop (http://grayson.vi2.com/tutorials/lighting)

[Jann-Lee]

I like you;re tutorial Grayson

very nice

[black swan]

nice work, eyebrows and eyelashes needs some corrections, a different haircut would be better, ears are too close to the head.

keep on and this model will be great, I promise ;)

[Sama3d]

Thanks for the feedBack, ill work on it.


heres some eye candy. Maya thing im workin on.

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