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aDiaNDi
02-01-2003, 03:41 PM
well this is what I'm working on two days now. the many little folds and other stuff will be bumped later.

c & c 's are welcome.

http://home.arcor.de/adiandi/gollumWIP2.jpg
Potato77
02-01-2003, 05:08 PM
his perportions are a bit off. i think the legs are a bit to long. also the seem to skinny like they cant support his body. the head is also too big and the hands are too small. fix that and you will be well on your way.
aDiaNDi
02-02-2003, 12:24 PM
well a new WIP shot:

http://home.arcor.de/adiandi/gollumWIP4-5.jpg

I hope it's better now. :)

thx so far
squidinc
02-02-2003, 12:38 PM
looking good :thumbsup:
a few things though
is he supposed to be smiling?
and his throat looks a little sharp, oh yeah, and the muscles on the backs of legs look a little to prominent, perhaps to angled

:)
aDiaNDi
02-02-2003, 12:50 PM
yes he will be smiling. he will get his teeth soon ;)

well the other things I will fix soon :)

thx!

edit: the throat has that hardedge because its an instance for now. It will disappear as soon as I weld them together :)
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