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vinzcool
09-28-2006, 08:32 AM
hey guys,
this is vinz... this is our main project which v did in toonz animation...
so watch the video and send critics/comments... (both are welcome..!!!).

http://www.4shared.com/file/4089497/da709949/this_is_the_one.html

enjoy..!!!

vinzcool
09-28-2006, 08:34 AM
critics and comments are welcome..! :shrug:

inmaya
09-28-2006, 04:03 PM
hi man ! It's a great animation short ..but I think you should improve your story a little more cause I dont really understand the meaning of it, I dont understand why the old dude want to 'kill' his music machine ... and one another thing the voices! I think the voices of the old guy and the machine are a little annoying :shrug: But it's a nice beginning in animation , keep working !

* Sorry for my poor English.

johnneTEE
09-28-2006, 10:37 PM
I have to agree with inmaya. The story is fairly weak. Why is the old man so mad at that poor victrolla? And the voices really need to be put undercontrol. It's a great start though. Constructively, look at the timing when the old man gets cracked on the head by his own cane. It seems he hangs there for a milisecond too long.

Can't wait to see the new version!

johnneTEE
http://www.johnnetee.com/video/demoreel_256.html

echoBars
09-28-2006, 10:50 PM
Pretty strange. Not that I mind that. I thought the best animation was the deformation animation on the gramaphone-squashing and stretching and such -it seemed more life-like than the old man. I assume the oldman beats the gramaphone because it stops singing and then the gramaphone retaliates? Anyway decent cartoonish style, i liked the sharp angles on the doorframes and windows, etc..


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