Still: Apple

[stephen2002]

the texture is pretty good, but more resolution on the geometry would help a lot.

Also the cut/bitten potion should appear more moist.

[Ocean Size]

Texture looks pretty good, bite mark looks very unnatural/fake, I suggest re-working that.

[JBruckner]

Doesnt really look like someone ate it, too flat IMO. Put it on a visable table also, that would help.

[Neox]

did you bool that bite? its to hard edged i guess... and don't forgett to putt some teeth "marks" in it, it currently doesn't look like it was eaten, i guess the texture is pretty cool but give it a higher resolution, and you should improve the shader a little bit, this glossyness is looking kinda wrong

but your getting better keep goin :thumbsup:

[WhiteRabbitObj]

Booleaned or displacement mapped. I am very inexperienced with displacement maps but I hear they tend to flatten things a bit, it looks like that bite is perhaps just a displacement map. Dunno tho!

I really like the texture on the skin of the apple though, it's almost perfect, it even has that thin whitish film that apples often have, especially when they're right off the tree. Pretty cool.

[Bob27]

Thanks for your comments all. It really helps improving my apple.

the apple geosphere was was boolean substracted from another
geosphere having the bite map done in photoshop and then
some vertices of the bite place moved back . But I guess I
should do that again this time allowing more teeth mark .

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