WIP: The Ringmaster

[RalphDamiani]

That's a good start, but the two things you should be correcting early before you proceed are:

- The lighting, since it's night time, your whole scene would be darker. Also you might want to play later with the lights from the carnival contrasting with the background (http://quidnunc.org/archives/carnival.gif), so make sure your sky is dark enough for the best effect (don't ever use true black though).

- The perspective of his left arm is wrong, it needs to stretch farther and the hand needs to be in a more relaxed position, more parallel to the camera perhaps. As is now it looks flat as if the arm is reaching from the bottom.

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