Temporal Nexus, Please CONSTRUCTIVELY criticize

[GeneralChaos]

I dont think you will be getting any crits, because it looks good to me, and its abstract art, and that cant really be critted because "flaws" may be on purpose.

Looks good tho.

[chlywly]

He're is one, the fonts and background really take a way from the forground, way too busy, not aestheticly pleasing by if you make the background more stubtle that may change.

[dmcgrath]

You really need to give us information on what it is to be used for and what you want us to crit. You are asking too broad a question for critiques. The image isn't particularly startling or fascinating, but I don't know your purpose for the image. Is it for a w/s? Is it just experimental personal work? Just asking for a constructive crit, you have to give us some guidelines.

[singularity2006]

heh, I know I'm being vague. It was just a wallpaper I made through messing with some new techniques. There's kind of a personal relfection embedded in there too. I have this obsession with the past and the words in the background are an emphasis of this. The flurry of lines and curves in the foreground is my interpretation of a temporal hole, a time warp, a way for me to take a step back and relive what I miss so much.

[SheepFactory]

i think the text is really distracting , mainly because the font is too big. i think it'll look better if you use a smaller font and vary the opacity.

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