Character : Girl in Bikini

[Rice ManX]

Hmm her arms don't look toned enuph? same goes wit her shoulders not defined enuph looks like a rag doll kinda? hmm collar bone needs work too. BUt her face is well done (not my kind of preferance, but is well modelled) her uhhm chest is really well done! :thumbsup:

[Savage_Henry]

nice work!!

I like the style you've chosen. Your color palette looks really nice, but I have to agree with Rice ManX...it needs some fine tuning.

I agree with all the points Rice ManX made, butI also want to point to the chest area. Her ribcage is a little too defined, and there seems to be a lack of definition in her armpit area. Her breast just melts into her chest area.

http://www.coolpopasia.com/niki%20taylor.jpg
I've attatched a pic that might help you out. Keep on it man. Your almost done:thumbsup:

[JBruckner]

Its lookin ok. Its just too dull, it needs more life. More layers of hair, and better skin tone, there are some great reads around on how to do skin textures, I just dont know where. :beer:

[Krystman]

This one is good.. You need more red tones, especialy in the shadows

http://www.3dfestival.com/story.php?story_id=490

[Plasticbag]

Don't know if its the weight maps that made the arms toneless. I think i should adjust it soon .

Is that skin tutorial for Maya only>.

[Abe]

First i must say i like her,and all her faults have been pointed out.But please get rid of her red nose she looks as if she's been on the bottle for months, but she's still better than i can do !!!

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