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jobeef
09-21-2006, 08:20 PM
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Title: Moon
Name: johannes bevelander
Country: Netherlands
Software: CINEMA 4D, Photoshop

I'm trying to write a fantasy book and I want some pictures in it. This is the first one. I want to make it look like a gamecharacter. I hope you like it.
Comments are most welcome!
mikeldi
09-22-2006, 06:53 AM
I like the girl, but I think her face looks too alienish. The legs could have more shape, not so thin, and you could put some shines in the weapon. I think it needs a little bit more work, and the composition couuld be improved.

I hope I havenīt been too rude, and I think for your first try itīs a good image.
Dann-O
09-23-2006, 05:45 AM
Interesting stylized pic. I agreee the lower legs need some calves to make it look right. I like the porportions although they are not realistic it works overall. I don't like how the hand closest to the camera looks as far as how it is attached. Good pose and nice comp overall.
jobeef
09-30-2006, 09:17 PM
thank you for your comments.
I'm gonna work on this picture a little longer.
I really want this to become a good one.
So thanks again for the tips
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