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jsgknight
09-21-2006, 06:52 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/148984/148984_1159634117_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/148984/148984_1159634117_large.jpg)

Title: The Thief
Name: Knight, Jason
Country: USA
Software: CINEMA 4D

High Resolution (http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/media/folder_130/file_1295689.jpg)
My Gallery (http://www.renderosity.com/homepage.php?Who=jsgknight)

This is my final image for the "Absence" contest over at www.irtc.org. Based on all of the suggestions that I received I have updated this post with the new image. Thanks for all the great advice.
Jadetiger
09-22-2006, 01:36 AM
Cute concept. I would make the painting label a little nicer. It takes away from the piece a little.
KhronoSS
09-22-2006, 04:23 AM
Hehe, this is funny :)

Great job :P
azynkron
09-22-2006, 09:06 AM
Just some crits:

1. The spots. If you were sitting on the couch you would obstruct the lighting of
the art.. right?

2. To me it looks a bit wierd with the power outlet in the floor.. but I might be wrong.

3. I would like more focus on the thief and the police. Perhaps with more contrast of
the spotlights

4. Like said, the plaque could use some rework.

Keep it up. :)
PhantomDesign
09-22-2006, 02:35 PM
The concept is AWESOME! I love it! It's not technically amazing, but I gave it 4 stars because of the creativity.
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