Some opinions people?

[Cockofthewok]

Interesting form. I looked at some of your other stuff. It's got that cool sort of hyper-stylized look to it. You'll make a great cartoonist someday. or are you already?

[Norante]

Good work, but try to avoid the kind of mix that you have between the left knee and right leg, and try to show at least a bit of the left arm.... just giving a hint of it, with the shoulder ,may do.

Keep it up man

[Korgath]

Like it, but what are the bubbles at her mouth? Is she in water?

[Cephas]

thanks people,

Cockofthewok; no i'm not a big caroonist... student animator at this time.

Norante; thanks for the advice... yeah my uni teach would kill me over her silhouette. It just kinda started as a random doodle tho, but yeah the pose could have been stronger.

Korgath; yeah she's in water. I really didn't bother with giving any other indications tho. I didn't really think it really mattered.

Thanks again guys.

Pete <oops...> Cephas

[Witczak]

I agree with the above, a hint of a left arm would be a good thing. Also your leg volumes below the knee are a bit off. I know your going for perspective, but they arn't that far apart in space.
I like the feel of it though and I like the wash colors. Nice work.

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