Concept, Boris Fernandois (3D)

[flewp]

It's a nice start, but I'd say it's far from being finished.

First and foremost, I recommend an interior for the car. It just always looks so half-hearted when you see a 3d modelled car with just straight black windows. Even with tinted windows, you can still see through the windshield a bit. The interior doesn't need to be highly detailed, just a simple dashboard and seats really. Just something to get rid of the solid black windows, and to break up the form inside the car.

Also could use some more details, such as a door handle, and windshield wiper(s).

Something about the modelling, and shading of the car also gives it a rather lumpy, and not-so-clean form.

The materials need quite a bit of work. It kind of looks like an illustration right now, which could be good, and may have been your intent, but it also just looks a bit off and funny.

All in all, I think you really need to go back and work on it quite a bit more before considering it finished. If this is your first car model, it's a good start, and if it was meant to be just a learning excercise, then you might be better suited to starting over, and applying what you've learned, and what you need to learn/work on on the next model.

[PremiereBoris]

I like the overall composition, it's a very pretty picture.
flewp's critique is correct in some cases, I disagree with him for saying it's not finished, but that's an opinion.

[ser09a]

Hi, esteem all the commentaries that do to me mainly if they are constructive and they help to improve my works
in this car from the beginning the idea was that it stayed as illustration. in my next cars it will improve the details that have commented to me
thanks flewp and PremiereBoris for so complete commentary

Thanks :bounce:

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