Vehicle: car_modena

[true_to_XSI]

this one to

[cuse]

if your looking for advice this should really be a wip.

anyway it looks nice, there's some bits to fix up if you want it to really look like a modena but i think it looks nicer as it is... front bumper is too big i think etc, but its nice, huge rims, very chrome :)

:applause:



cuse

[true_to_XSI]

engine

[Idi]

I luv cars esp. Ferrari and Bmw's. This is a very nice design but does not look like a modenna to be honest unless it's a modified
version of one.

[cuse]

nice engine. still it does look nice, not a classy tho...



cuse

[Ocean Size]

The models look pretty good.

The things that stand out most to me are that the cars and the background are virtually the same color, you definitely need more contrast to make the scene more interesting and bring out the countour of the cars more. Also, the lighting needs lots of work, the first pic looks like it's just lit with one spot light with too high of intensity. The renders could also be higher quality. And as mentioned before, this probably belongs in the WIP section.

[nose]

Originally posted by Idi
I luv cars esp. Ferrari and Bmw's. This is a very nice design but does not look like a modenna to be honest unless it's a modified
version of one.

Indeed. The front is too high. The hood run more downwards. This one is too straight. I think that will fix a lot of the look of the Modena.

[Idi]

I think the front end needs some work, like the front bits just before the lights needs to move a bit back toward the lights
too much space between the front and the lights, the front seems to square needs to be more rounded.
Also the lights are not quite right they should wrap around the bonnet more almost touching the bumper section.
Hope it helps...

[Bliz]

The seams look like they need a lot of work, especially the front 'boot' compartment.

The sun roof also looks a bit flimsy, like it would be ripped off at full speed.

To be honest I'd agree with CUSE and get this in the WIP section.

[true_to_XSI]

thanks guys i will give my buddy the advice you told me

[Mikrob]

Good job. Make backgroung if you want!:beer: :buttrock:

[coolmanmatt]

Looks pretty good!

[mekone]

i love the look of the car and the fact that he captured that whole car show feel with the layout...the only thing that i might fix on it is the 3rd pic...the hood seems to be just a little over reflective...but other than that dude KICK ASS

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