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malc0lm

01-29-2003, 09:02 PM

Hi all, I just finnish I modell I've been wrking on the last hour (modelling exercise).
It's meant to be a Star Wars-ish star craft. (POD design and the chrome effect from Queen/Senator Amidala's ship).

Anyhows, C&C IS welcome and wanted!!
(any tips/crits/comments at all is welcome, dont be shy ;))
http://w1.132.telia.com/~u13211660/snett_bakifran.jpg
http://w1.132.telia.com/~u13211660/snett_framifran.jpg
http://w1.132.telia.com/~u13211660/side.jpg
http://w1.132.telia.com/~u13211660/front.jpg

1 last thing, dont mind the Low-poly count on some spots on the craft... Forgot to turn on Hypernurbs before render :argh:.

Cheers!

squidinc

01-29-2003, 09:19 PM

its a nice looking start but those wings really need thickening up a bit, looks like they'd snap off if it turned, try and build up the mid section aswell, to give somewhere for things like fuel, ammo, that sort of thing :)

kraal

01-31-2003, 08:03 AM

same here...plus the material needs more pop...maybe add an environment to the reflection

Arrias

01-31-2003, 11:19 AM

Looking good:thumbsup:
One thing that stands out to me is that although the whole body of it is very streamlined and smooth yet the cockpit seems to be very angular compared to it and could maybe do with smoothing out to fit in with the rest of it.
Although that could very well just be personal taste ;)

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