2D: Girl With Dragon (Big Image)

[e338]

hi
not bad, but not finished in my humble opinion.
The level of detail isn't the same everywhere, which could be a quality, but as it's not focused on something in particular, it gives time to travel from one point to another.
exemple:
I go to the eyes first, when i see your pict.
They ain't bad, so My eyes are sliding on the nose, it's ok too. Lips lacks specular. eras, ... mmmm prob!
Neck isn't detailled enough, same for the shoulders, arm (shape a bit rough), ankle a bit too big i think.
The dragon has no areas as detailled as the head of the girl.

There is a cool light effect on the cord too photoreel to be alone in the pict.
Put some more in the clothes, eyes, speculars, or throw it away.

Breasts is almost hidden, so, at that moment, we've done the first pass.

The others passes will reveal more problems, as always and for most of the human works.

So you have to detail more those parts, creating a natural way to read your picture and convinced peoples' eyes to see what you want'em to.

Are you ok with that?
keep goin'

[ceql]

comments duly noted and appreciated ;)
lol, yea, I got a bit lazy with some parts, and I'll make sure I do more passes next time ;) Also, Specualr is something that I keep neglecting, but I'll definetely keep that in mind for next time :D

Thanks for the suggestions ;)

[LordEzzat]

Looks very nice,I like it you got a woman and a dragon cant go wrong with those too,,,wish i had a wacom...anyways keep it up !!

[ceql]

lol thnx ;)

[cuse]

very nice, but i agree it needs a little reworking, theres some very good detail but some textures look incomplete.

if you get back onto it give us a shout and we'll send over more feedback, very good start tho.


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cuse

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