cartoon shaded 'cool' guy > C&C please

[dEDa]

It seems cool, maybe the hands are little and the fingers too short, or the head too big... the shoulders are too round. Go on, good luck!
dEDa

[Sister Ky]

Yes, shoulders are too round. Resize the arms in a way that the hands stay where they are but the shoulders go up.

I don't think he's looking too cool. He got a way too curious facial expression to be cool... make him look more bored...
And brown pants...? Brown?

Greetz, Ky.

[Menesis]

Here's a little progress of my little ink n paint project/experiment:
http://www.student.io.tudelft.nl/io1192736/3d/inknpaint3.jpg

I also modified the shoulders (and the colour of the pants) of the man, but he needs further improvement :buttrock:

[Sister Ky]

Her nose looks kinda strange..? Like the tip was very pointy...?
And crop those little hair-strands at the left... I think they look very weird O.o... in this view, anyway...

Greetz, Ky.

[Menesis]

Thanks for poiting out the problems at the nose, I missed that one :thumbsup:
The hair is a bit of a struggle; This is already the 3rd technique I'm trying out. But you're also right about the tips of the hair. I'll improve the geometry

[Sister Ky]

Indeed, now that you mention it... O.o the guy has different hair than the girl... hmm.
I think poly-hair fits better with the style.. but it's a lot more work for short, hedgehog-hairstyles...

Greetz, Ky.

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