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Uzziel
09-11-2006, 08:32 AM
Hey all, im making a scifi environment and im allmost done with the turret for this thing. Let me know what you think, I need some crits! :) Thanks!

http://www.geoff-hill.com/images/turret_geoffhill.jpg

http://www.geoff-hill.com/images/turret_new01.jpg

Uzziel
09-11-2006, 09:15 PM
looking for feedback thanks. :)

BenEoff
09-11-2006, 09:19 PM
Hey man I think it's great, I'd say add some dirt, but it's cleanness matches the environment. Maybe just some scorching around the barrel? I like it.

JesseMoody
09-11-2006, 10:33 PM
looking good my friend. I would say finish up those un textured items and add some scorching like the man said and this can almost be done. Also I would add some cables and other stuff to break up the open space of the roof. It would add a lot to the detail side and cables can be just a basic procedural texture.

General Midi
09-11-2006, 11:29 PM
This is very good work man.

Very unique looking guns...
I agree some burnmarks could look great on these.

Paul G
09-11-2006, 11:49 PM
G'day Uzziel,


I like the silhouette of the turrets, but one thing that stands out that I dont like is the way you've textured it. The panelling is textured well, but doesn't look like it makes much technical sense. Looks asthough you're just trying to fill up some space on the texture by throwing a whole heap of "turrety" elements on it. I think it'd look a lot better if you look at some factory machine references or whatever u think is needed to make the texture look like it serves a purpose. Then it'd be more believable.

The 2 guns together look good but are very uniform, maybe offset their rotations to make them look more used.

Looks cool though mate.

Paul

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