Dont Walk - Short Animation

[Kickflipkid687]

I thought the dogs mouth looked kinda wierd, but it was a funny animation overall. I really liked it alot!

[lilurik]

lol that was great. Simple, but funny. Nice work. :thumbsup:

[CBAnimator]

thanks! I appreciate that.

[rblitz7]

hehe cute short man!:) How about adding some music to it?

[AikoWorld]

Hey man, nice job,

The things that triggerd my eye.

-When the sign switches from walk to to slow! i cant see the difrents in the characters expresion.

-When he is waiting for the walk sign, and he puts his hands on the wast, it moves a little bit, try to stick it using a locater or so.

+ You made great sillouhets
+ Great expresions

Good job man. Keep it up.

[CBAnimator]

i think you're right! i didnt catch those things before.
thanks a lot rblitz7 and AikoWorld!

[SMWilly]

simple and funny.

very enjoyable, audio would help.

[freakmoomin]

nice seq :)

All pretty good so ill just be picky and point out a couple of things for c+c.

Animation was pretty nice, but its a little stiff at points, he could do with loosening up a little and i also thought you could have pushed it a little more, make it a little more extreme, it was a little safe at times. but nice.

I feel you could have probebly cut it down a little and quicken it up and play with the camera cuts.

audio would have helped aswell.

good stuff

[monkey-sage]

he stomps his right foot near the end and then the left one. I think that you should just increase the emphasis on the first stomp and loose the second. It'll speed things up just a bit, when you want the pace to be picking up anyway.

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