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CBAnimator
09-09-2006, 11:16 PM
Hi everyone. I recently finished up a short animation called "Dont Walk".

Take a look, and let me know what you think. Tell me if you enjoy it.
All constructive suggestions and comments are very welcome, and would be appreciated.

http://www.cbanimator.com/Movies/Dont_Walk_Chris_Bennett.mov

Thanks!
Chris

Kickflipkid687
09-10-2006, 02:27 AM
I thought the dogs mouth looked kinda wierd, but it was a funny animation overall. I really liked it alot!

lilurik
09-10-2006, 04:35 PM
lol that was great. Simple, but funny. Nice work. :thumbsup:

CBAnimator
09-10-2006, 06:11 PM
thanks! I appreciate that.

rblitz7
09-10-2006, 07:02 PM
hehe cute short man!:) How about adding some music to it?

AikoWorld
09-10-2006, 10:46 PM
Hey man, nice job,

The things that triggerd my eye.

-When the sign switches from walk to to slow! i cant see the difrents in the characters expresion.

-When he is waiting for the walk sign, and he puts his hands on the wast, it moves a little bit, try to stick it using a locater or so.

+ You made great sillouhets
+ Great expresions

Good job man. Keep it up.

CBAnimator
09-11-2006, 12:33 AM
i think you're right! i didnt catch those things before.
thanks a lot rblitz7 and AikoWorld!

SMWilly
09-11-2006, 08:26 PM
simple and funny.

very enjoyable, audio would help.

freakmoomin
09-12-2006, 12:56 AM
nice seq :)

All pretty good so ill just be picky and point out a couple of things for c+c.

Animation was pretty nice, but its a little stiff at points, he could do with loosening up a little and i also thought you could have pushed it a little more, make it a little more extreme, it was a little safe at times. but nice.

I feel you could have probebly cut it down a little and quicken it up and play with the camera cuts.

audio would have helped aswell.

good stuff

monkey-sage
09-12-2006, 05:33 AM
he stomps his right foot near the end and then the left one. I think that you should just increase the emphasis on the first stomp and loose the second. It'll speed things up just a bit, when you want the pace to be picking up anyway.

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