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Title: Forêt d'hiver
Name: David Tiphaneaux
Country: France
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop
This is my first attempt to make a woman character.
I try to make my vision of a woman elf. I didn't want her to be really human.
My objectif was not realism.
I known that it need more work but I wan to start something new
I used 3dsmax for modeling / rendering and photoshop for texturing / compositing
Here a better rez image:
http://perso.orange.fr/david.tiphaneaux/Pics/Images/foretdhiver_HD.jpg
other test:
http://david.tiphaneaux.free.fr/Pics/Images/wip_femme-elf.jpg
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ChrisMann
09-08-2006, 01:19 AM
Nice work. I like the lighting and facial expression.
Things to improve on;
-Skin texture. Lacking foundation detail (pore and overall color variation such as blushed areas,) blemishes too overpowering. Lips are very nice though.
-Ear model detail. For such a prominent part of her character, the ear should have more structural detail. The tip for example could be shaped more interestingly.
I really like the texturing work on her costume, nice hair/fur replication.
unwrap
09-08-2006, 01:22 AM
I like this, in fatc I love it. You've done a great job, on the face and the clothes too. My only crit would be the three reflected squares in her eyes, you might want to change their shapes (make blurred circles or something). I think you're up fpr an award, congrats and good luck :thumbsup: .
seventhronin
09-08-2006, 02:55 AM
agree, shes got such a lovely expression
I like the fur youve put on her coat too
Id like to give her a hug to warm her eh :P
living_for_cg
09-08-2006, 07:19 AM
Nice modeling and rendering.!:thumbsup:.its nice if you put the uvs.
AlexStratulat
09-08-2006, 07:44 AM
Very good work!!! :thumbsup:
Keep it!!
mattia242
09-08-2006, 03:38 PM
great work! 5 stars for me!
I would like to thanks you for your comments.:)
thks EnginesOfCreation for pointing these problems, I will do better next time
For those who are interesting, here the wireframe:
http://david.tifano.free.fr/dl/test2.jpg
Here the rest of the body that i have plan to use. But I havn't enough free time to continu it.
http://david.tifano.free.fr/dl/test.jpg
Thanks for taking you're time to posting
visionmaster2
09-08-2006, 07:36 PM
miaaaaaouuuuu that is great works ! i love the expression;
le model complet dechire ! the wires are very clean.:eek: :thumbsup:
Lacrevette
09-09-2006, 08:50 AM
Ah ouais, de la tuerie le reste du corps, tout est carrément bien géré ;)
5* pour l'ensemble, ça mérite franchement que tu continues ;)
irananimator
09-09-2006, 09:38 AM
Wooow.
very nice modeling.
Great job.i like your work.
Hamed katebi
chiari
09-09-2006, 09:56 AM
Really beautifull render! Congratulation :thumbsup:
The shader of the skin is really great. There is just one thing: I don't like too much the top of the ear (too round for me)... :D
five stars for me :applause:
karko
09-09-2006, 12:38 PM
Good job, the light is sweet and really magic like some cold days of winters….
(Et puis, bien d’autres choses plus faciles pour moi à exprimer en français telle que l’harmonie des bleus, le nacré de la peau…Sinon, très belle modélisation particulièrement visible avec la troisième image.)
ipdesigner
09-09-2006, 01:57 PM
*This is 'frontpage'!!:bounce::bounce:
*very nice work!!:thumbsup:
i rememder an early version[beter one imho] of this amaizing character .
it turned out to be great pic of art , 5* from me, very good job David :applause:
therealdeal20
09-10-2006, 04:18 AM
very good. im sure im missing some more stuff but one this i noticed was the eye and the reflection on the right eye or left on her.
gaiasgrace
09-12-2006, 11:49 AM
I love this piece of work. There's a real feel to it, colours, her expression, and a hint of the environment all adds to a sense of believability. Well done.
Many thanks again for your comment, it help me a lot :)
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